I Don't Shoot Women

April 23, 2009
By JeanniF. PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
JeanniF. PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York
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“Don’t worry,” Sheri Moon said, dangling the gun from her finger, “I don’t kill women. Your boyfriend on the other hand…” Jenna’s lips quivered. “Roy was real stupid, opening the door like that.” She raised the gun and aimed.
“Bang,” Otis whispered around his gum.
Sheri Moon laughed.
Roy didn’t.
Jenna smiled.
Otis chewed.

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hhtay BRONZE said...
on May. 5 2009 at 3:36 am
hhtay BRONZE, Sherman Oaks, California
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This is really, really cool! I really enjoyed reading this short bit. I'm very impressed with how you were able to convey such strong characters in such a short period of time. Keep up the great work!

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