the secrets of the winter dusk

March 9, 2013
By x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
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He who faces give no light shall never become a star


All she wanted was a kiss.A simple kiss.I was hesitant, because if she found out my secret than it would be all over.But her eyes taunted me,i was trapped by her enchanting gaze.I fell under her spell.i kissed her.then it happened. the secret i was trying to keep.my brown eyes turned blue,and the moment got cold.so did her body.with that fateful kiss her body turned into a block of ice in front of me.and i knew i had frozen my one true love.i touched her face. and her body withered away with the wind.i watched the snow flakes;that now became her body drift away.i cry,but the tear freezes on my face. why was cursed with this UN-controllable power?i can blast ice from hands,and survive at extremely cold temperatures,but what does that matter when i can never love,without turning my girl friend into snow?day turns to night and my body is consumed by the shadows.waiting for what my next move shall be......



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GreyGirl ELITE said...
on May. 4 2013 at 2:36 am
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
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Beautifully written. However, remember to capitalize "I" when talking in the first person :)

on May. 4 2013 at 1:26 am
Shaas_It_is.. BRONZE, Udupi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Happiness presents itself before man with a crown of sorrow. He who accepts it must accept both.
-Swami Vivekananda

Don't be led by your problems. Be led by your dreams.

Its beautiful night star!!! Really captivating and sad.. good work.. :)  

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on Apr. 25 2013 at 8:41 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

Heyy Thanxs!!!! Its actually its a short story !!!

on Apr. 17 2013 at 5:48 pm
VanityInsanity GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
My eyes may be smiling but my heart frowns at me.

heyyyyy davennier!!!! Tyesha Here :) loves teh poem. i never saw this one. Its so freaking awesome.


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