Opulence This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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I’ve been watching him for days now. When he leaves his house to go to school, I’m the one carefully tailing him, switching cars every day to make myself look less suspicious. If he ever sneaks out of his second-story room, I’ll be the one silently watching from a nearby tree. In class when he turns, feeling eyes on the back of his head, I’m the one who sent the hair on the back of his neck up on end. I am the girl whose shadow is always slightly overlapping his.

Being assigned to watch him almost makes me
feel like I’m not a stalker. Though I’m only 17, I’m a full-fledged member of the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. I’ve been with them since the ­tender age of five. It’s my home. Being an orphan, my office is also my permanent residence, the couch a fold-out bed. There are many others like me: no family. A lot of us are loners and haven’t chosen this route for ourselves.

I’m a tracker. I have been for years and some might say that I am the best at not being the best. In other words, I’m great at being invisible. Or at not being noticed. It’s not as hard as the others in the organization think. Being young and female is good, since most we track are young. Seeing me around younger people – my age, actually – doesn’t raise alarm bells. It helps that I’m cute. With a small frame, light hazel eyes, and short blond hair that curls under my chin, I don’t appear threatening. Of course, my ­organization-funded training doesn’t back that theory.

Soon I won’t be tracking down others with the power. They are finally going to give me an apprentice. After years of mastering everything I’ve been taught, they see my potential. That’s not to say I know everything. Even with my extended life I won’t be able to learn all the things I want to. If only this annoying boy would show the signs. It’s been almost a week. If he doesn’t show soon, they’ll reassign me. That much longer until I get my apprentice.

So here I am, sipping a latté and waiting for the Target to leave for school. I have been put in all of his classes in case something happens there, though I graduated high school years ago. Private tutors sped things up. With no family or personal ties, I had lots of time to devote to my studies. Martial arts black belts. Twelve languages, not including English. Everything a girl needs for a serious career in the agency. Such positions of power are not handed out easily. You must prove yourself many times over.

The Target and I have never spoken, but I know a lot about him. His file told me some, but after watching him for only a few days, I feel confident in saying that I know things no one else does. Not just the obvious, either. He resents his father and is protective of his mother, which makes me suspect the father is less than faithful. He smiles often but doesn’t make a lot of eye contact. He usually only speaks when spoken to. Although he has many friends, he isn’t close with any of them. The Target is observant, a watcher. This leads me to believe we would get along if he shows any promise.

I look down at my watch, then back at his house a few blocks away. The Target is late, which means I’ll be late too. Today my ride is a shiny black sports car, not out of place in this suburb full of midlife-crisis men. I turn on the engine impatiently. I’m fiddling with the radio when I hear something. I don’t feel any immediate danger, and I know to trust those feelings. But I ­also know that something is off.

Just as I am about to get out of the car and pretend to look in the trunk, the passenger door opens. I look up in surprise as the Target slides into the seat next to me. I grin, quite pleased by this turn of events. This is definitely a good sign. Perhaps intuition is strong in him. That would be good for my apprentice to have, complementary. I could handle having to deal with that.

“Hello, Lenna. Why have you been following me for a week now?” the Target asks lightly, conversationally, his first words ever said in my direction.

Ah, one of my many aliases. The organization set it up so that whenever I’m on a case, I get a new name, past, and present. It’s very powerful. The organization can basically do anything it needs; it has people everywhere imaginable. I’m just one of many, though there aren’t that many at the top, as I am. They don’t trust many to be trackers. Or to be apprentices. All of the full members have the power, though we control others to get things done.

My smile deepens as I say in my authoritative, professional voice, “My real name is Jade. I am a witch of the moon and a tracker for the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. You are also a witch. We would like to formally welcome you into the organization as my apprentice. Here is my card for verification.”

Jade Wordsworth
Tracker for O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E
Official Political Understanding Lending ­Everyone ­Navigation for Co-Existing Ethereals
Office hours: 8 a.m.-3 p.m. Mon-Sat
Phone: 555-5555
Proud league of witches of the sun and moon.

“What do you mean ‘moon and sun’? Or ‘tracker’?” he asks, still looking at my card like it’s going to ­disappear.

“Types of magic. Moon is all about spells, the sun is more potion-based, though each type of witchcraft involves the other somehow. As a tracker, I find people like you and I bring them to O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. Every witch must register, train, and become a member by law. In fact, the organization is like a government targeted toward witches,” I explain with a smile, loving the fact that this time I get to teach the newbie.

“Magic? Seriously?” he asks, eyes wide, meeting mine. They are large, yellow, and catlike.

I click a button on my left, automatically locking the doors. I put the car into drive, pulling out onto the road. As an afterthought I add as a courtesy, “I think you had better come with me.” .

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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Dill said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 11:24 pm
People need to grow up I thought it was an intertaning story
SilentVoice said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 8:35 pm
This is an amazing story. I really enjoy the way you describe this person who on the inside just needs a good friend
nice said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 7:26 pm
nice story, very awesome
FrenchHippie said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 4:47 pm
You should definitely keep this story going. We can never have enough stories about magic... especially ones with magic and spy stuff!
FyndFyre replied...
Sept. 14, 2012 at 8:19 am
If you like magic, try the novel "Demoness." :-)
Blairezie said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 4:06 pm
Sounds like the opening chapter to a book.
writingrox2 replied...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 11:55 am
I agree. It's really good and very captivating, but it seems like there should be more. I hope you stem off this into a book--I'd love to read it!
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May 18, 2012 at 7:58 am
This story is horrible.
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vazenitran98 said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 9:04 am
This was amazing! I was just looking up random articles and stumbled upon this one. Yes,it's indeed amazing!
Ahmad-Mobeen said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 11:15 pm

Graet! =D

Keep it up! =)

melyssaanne said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 8:12 pm
Love it, I never expected the little twist at the end. It's great!!
lzcelloplayer said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 2:58 pm

I really enjoyed this piece, especially the pacing because sometimes a piece can be too slow and the reader will get bored because it takes time to build a world. Or the piece can be too fast and the reader will get confused. 

I would love to read more of it! 



GoGreenGirl said...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 7:39 am
I really like this story.  It's very nice and I'm happy that it got published.  Keep writing!! :D
GoGreenGirl replied...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 7:40 am

Sorry that comment was worthless xD

I just got to teen ink

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Dec. 3, 2011 at 7:58 pm
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ThomasConnor said...
Nov. 18, 2011 at 9:37 am
Great story!!!!!! Couldn't stop reading it:)
Tinyclaw said...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 6:47 pm
I really like this story!! It's definetly something I would read if it was a real book! I really hope you'll publish it and I look forward to seeing this on the shelves!!
bleedingbutterfly said...
Nov. 17, 2011 at 2:13 pm
wow thats awesome it sounds so firmilier but not like ive read it before can you continue the story?
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