Desert clip

November 25, 2010
By MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'


He slid off the dusty roof and onto his horse, looking around the silent alley. His horse, a black mustange with blood red eyes, stomped the ground impaitently awaiting the coming race against death. The sun beat doown on the cowboy's hat; he narrowed his shaded blue eyes. Silently the small breeze whispered in his ear. It was time. The devil horwe reared up as he kicked 'em into motion. They raced out of the alley and into the open desert in their racing dance with death


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on Jul. 12 2011 at 11:03 am
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

i dread the comming of that day--but u r probably right. :P

MidnightFire said...
on Jul. 11 2011 at 10:56 pm
exactly i think that eventually the english language is just going to be txt talk

on Jul. 11 2011 at 9:18 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

very tru! in fact, we use it less and less in anything we do, electronicaly that is. people on teen ink are useualy okay, though--they at least make an effort, while on some sites it is clare that the writer doesn't care at all.

on Jul. 10 2011 at 11:00 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

ya and sometimes you spell a word right but use it wrong grammerly like with their, there and they're :) why does grammer have to bee so complicated, we don't even use it right when we talk to each other

on Jul. 9 2011 at 12:03 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

oh, no--i didn't mean for you to start fussing with it! it is amazing as is--the worst thing you can do is judge a peice by its mistakes. i have a terrible habit of repeating myself in my comments so i was looking for something uniue to point out--spelling typos are not uniue to any of us, though, i don't think.

on Jul. 8 2011 at 12:45 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

haha aren't animals beautiful bugs aren't for everyone keep up the good work

on Jul. 8 2011 at 10:22 am
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

thanks :) my dad grew up always having a cat or a cat with kittens and my mom grew up always having a dog and loving horses. So i grew up with all three around and now i love all animals ... except bugs and snakes, snakes are cool looking but i watched to much Animal Planet growing up :)

on Jul. 7 2011 at 11:14 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 735 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

are u an animal person... i love horses i always wanted one but i don't live where they are this is great i love your little descriptions they leave me wanting more :P

on Jul. 5 2011 at 8:51 pm
MidnightFire PLATINUM, Lincoln, Illinois
40 articles 6 photos 239 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Dream as if you will live forever, live as if you'll die tomorrow.'
for my sister: 'when life gives me lemons ... i eat them'
'do not be afraid, be faithful'
'God is not safe, but He's good'

i just reread that and realized i misspelled a lot, even horse i spelled horwe ... my family owns a horse and i still spelled it wrong ... wow i guess i didn't spell check this one (:

on Jul. 2 2011 at 2:45 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
26 articles 0 photos 232 comments

Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

shadowy--there is no need for answers or even questions. you are missing some punctuation.


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