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We sat in a drowsy daze, blowing cool air on each other’s necks. That’s when we heard the jingle. I jumped up, my thighs sticking to the deck, grasping a dollar in my sticky summer hands.

Together we ran, our bare feet slapping against the hot tar of our dead-end street. Seeking refuge in the shadows of leafy trees, the truck whizzed past. That was our game.

Our hair billowed as we ran. I stopped. He had won again. Some days he would let us win, but when he didn’t, the ice cream tasted that much sweeter.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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callmeikeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 8 at 9:33 pm:
I like this piece because it gives me a nostalgic feeling of running in the summer trying to catch the ice cream man. Pretty short but you added enough detail to give me the full picture of what was happening. Well done. I hope to see more of your work.
 
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dpow18 said...
Jan. 24 at 2:54 pm:
This is hands down the worst thing ive ever read in my life.
 
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CalligraphicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 24 at 11:44 am:
It was really short and sweet, great job!
 
dpow18 replied...
Jan. 24 at 2:54 pm :
this is hands down the worst thing ive ever read in my life
 
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Poetry1518This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 2 at 2:15 pm:
PLEASE DON'T READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED ON THE NEAREST FRIDAY BY THE ONE YOU LOVE. NOW YOU'VE STARTED READING THIS SO DON'T STOP. THIS IS REALLY FREAKY!!! 1)say your name 10 times 2)say your mom's name 5 times 3)say your crush's name 3 times 4)paste this on 4 other posts. if you do this your crush will kiss you on the nearest friday. if you don't do this after reading this you will get bad luck send this to 4 other post in 143 minutes when done press F6 and the name of your crush will a... (more »)
 
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Def_Leppard_fan120This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 3:41 am:
Come check out my paper called THE BATTLE
 
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violetharmonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 25, 2011 at 11:17 am:
Very charming, I love it.
 
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MyBlue. said...
Nov. 23, 2011 at 9:39 pm:
Awesome! Its' was cute! ;)
 
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AmayaSakarutaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 19, 2011 at 10:14 am:
this is a nice drabble, i like it :D please comment/rate on my fiction peice, "Broken glass Mirror" (for lack of better name) thank u!
 
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heather_marieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 28, 2011 at 12:47 pm:
~smile~ i love it:)
 
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speedygirl13 said...
Oct. 28, 2011 at 11:41 am:
Wow I like that it was so good.
 
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emilybwritesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 7:44 pm:
wow this is fantasticall!!!!!!! please check out my poem "Forgotten Domain" and comment/rate it? thanks:)
 
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paigeturner9This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 7:09 pm:
love this! I know others are telling you to add to it, but I really think you should keep it short and sweet. 
 
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TheIdiot said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 1:44 pm:
Its a very descriptive way of telling us you waited then ran to the ice cream. Its very short I saw you should add some other interesting part.
 
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mercebeinyata said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 9:03 pm:

I kind of wish that you would give us a bit of exposition, but keep up the good work.

Also (sorry to advertise) could everyone please check out my new story called "Purple-face Tom" it is my 1st posted work on this site. 

 
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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 5:35 pm:
Great story! It was simple but still  great! keep writing! I just posted two new stories called the beast and nightstalker. if any of u read my storied make sure u post comments if u liked it or not or if i should change anything. Thanks! :D
 
writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 1:10 pm :
nightstalker part three, four, and five is now out! Go check it out if you liked the first and second! :)(:
 
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Mz.Tinkerbell13 said...
May 5, 2011 at 12:18 pm:
i like this story.
 
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zhlenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 9:47 pm:
its short sweet and simple. i luv it so. check out my wrk if you can. Thanks
 
scrabblebabble replied...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 7:30 am :
i loved it
 
writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 5:36 pm :
what is your work called?
 
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MidnightRoyaleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 15, 2011 at 7:16 pm:
Haha! This is great! I love the description and the fun little twist - very cool! I love it!
 
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ErikaK said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 5:50 pm:
I love it!!
 
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MeanPeopleDead said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 12:40 pm:
blacktop! ah, blacktops..
 
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CrazyKid56 said...
Oct. 19, 2010 at 10:10 am:
Reminds me of getting ice cream in my old neighborhood. Good memories. Keep writing!
 
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xAllegria said...
Oct. 3, 2010 at 8:02 pm:
One of the best pieces I've read in a while... good job! :)
 
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Avidreaderandwriter said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 8:26 pm:
This just says summer.
 
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teen_inkwriting said...
Jul. 23, 2010 at 3:02 pm:
THIS IS AWESOME!!!! I love it!
 
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lovetowriteandwatchTV said...
Jul. 1, 2010 at 3:19 pm:

good job, you can picture an ice cream man being nice and doing that

 

 
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shywriter said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 10:11 am:
hahahah nice one!! Very nicely written!!
 
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J-HOCKEY-DOG said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 11:23 pm:
This was awsome some sad part but very intreging
 
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starfishgurl said...
Jun. 9, 2010 at 10:12 pm:
amazing. i am not suprised this was published in the magazine! i love it! please write more!
 
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~*)Wish(*~ said...
Apr. 4, 2010 at 9:49 pm:
this is really good!
 
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fathertime22 said...
Mar. 15, 2010 at 3:24 pm:
very good story
 
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soccercrazy said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 9:18 pm:
short, sweet, still really descriptive, and since it begins as quick as it starts, the story wraps itself up nicely. i love it.
 
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Ethershine said...
Dec. 15, 2009 at 6:18 pm:
There's not much I can say about this. It's short, concise...basically...perfect.
Brings back the memories. I was always frustrated at the truck for not stopping for me at least a few seconds...but eventually I caught on. You have to compete for your ice cream. :)
 
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mrsabbyjonas13This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 6:20 pm:
That's awesome! You really have a talent. I agree with the person above who noted how descriptive you were, which is excellent, because it grasps the reader SO MUCH MORE. Great job! Keep writing!!
 
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colcojo said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 9:03 pm:
Nice job. It was very descriptive, and, as a reader, that is a major "plus." I especially like when you said, "Together we ran, our bare feet slapping against the hot tar of our dead end street. Seeking refuge in the shadows of leafy treas, the truck whizzed past. That was our game." because I find it very easy to envision two young kids, intent on beating the ice cream truck in a race, mercilessly pounding on the asphalt down a road. I also can relate to the bit when you sai... (more »)
 
colcojo replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 9:32 pm :
*trees (sorry)
 
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colcojo said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 8:52 pm:
No Comment
 
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Jonathan C. said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 8:41 pm:
I loved it. Me and my cousin used to do the same thing. Good times.
 
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isupporttheusa said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 3:08 pm:
Memories :D Great piece!
 
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Rob J. said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 3:44 pm:
Well done and concise. This brings back memories
 
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Melinda L.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 30, 2009 at 11:42 pm:
Sweet. Simple. Perfect. It reminds me of the days when I was little and me and my brother would run to the ice cream truck, and eating the sweet strawberry ice cream (chocolate for my brother).
 
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YeseniaG said...
Apr. 1, 2009 at 11:51 pm:
Good work. Sweet and simple :]
 
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stupidaccrebessa said...
Sept. 3, 2008 at 9:16 pm:
Loved it.
 
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Brandynoel said...
Aug. 19, 2008 at 3:57 pm:
I really liked this. It was simple, yet beautiful. Great job :)
 
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stargal77 said...
Aug. 26, 2008 at 12:32 am:
i agree with Brandynoel
 
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