No Time

August 6, 2010
By lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
14 articles 19 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
The problem is, you think you have time.


One time, One try. Time to escape.
Escape these walls, escape the pain.
But first i must say just one thing before I'm free.
How could you?

I take a breath, i take it in deep.
Never knowing the last one I'll be able to take.
taking a chance, like making a jail break.

Make a run for it. Life will flash. You'll finally know what life meant, you'll find your purpose, but you think to yourself when your last moments of thought will be up.
You think about all my the good. All the bad.

You don't think of it, because it just takes your breath away, all those memories, all those times.

Just breakaway.


The author's comments:
Just thoughts and pencil in my hand.

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on Jun. 21 2011 at 11:26 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

This is great! I loved the message!

on Aug. 15 2010 at 6:22 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

I liked reading this poem; I think you made a very good point. You know, about risk and all.

LoMi said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 5:16 pm
This is really good, but agree ^

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Aug. 15 2010 at 3:14 am
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
6 articles 0 photos 212 comments
this should be under poetry.....


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