She's Gone

April 1, 2010
By Babygrl016 BRONZE, Flint, Michigan
Babygrl016 BRONZE, Flint, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
In the book of life, the answers aren't in the back. (Charlie Brown)
- Charles Schulz


We had just walked into my house, my brother and I. We both had been having a rough day and just figured that our mom was still with our aunt, still taking care of her. Getting the dishes cleaned and working together, we cleaned the house like always. Soon the phone rang and we already knew it had happened. As the tears ran, neither of us needed to hear what my cousin told us anyway. The van pulled in just as the words came out. She’s gone. The tears ran harder the affirmation.


The author's comments:
This is just the first paragraph of a paper I am writing.

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on Jun. 14 2010 at 10:13 pm
Babygrl016 BRONZE, Flint, Michigan
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
In the book of life, the answers aren't in the back. (Charlie Brown)
- Charles Schulz

Thanks I posted the ending but i didnt like the full thing. So I am redoing it and i posted the beginning of that one on here

kasi forever said...
on May. 26 2010 at 3:40 pm
i love this, it reminds me so much of my grandmother, you should really keep going i love your beginning i can't wait for your ending!!


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