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In reflecting on the events of my life that have impacted me, I returned to the night of August 1, 2006. I found myself in Row G of Radio City Music Hall in New York City sitting by my mother, not at all tired, although we had flown from Las Vegas to Syracuse the day before, and my family had driven five hours to the city for “An Evening with Harry, Carrie and Garp,” a charity event with readings by three authors. The excitement rushing through me kept me awake and alert; I was standing and applauding a tiny blonde woman with amazing silver snake shoes as she prepared to read.

The Harry Potter series was my gateway drug into my intellectual puberty. I was so fascinated by the Harry Potter world that my mother began taking me to academic conferences focused on the books. Beginning with The Witching Hour in 2005, through Lumos, Prophecy, Portus, and Azkatrz in 2009, I have attended presentations about the Latin etymology of terms and spells, the mythical tales of the artifacts, and the idea of literary alchemy. These books opened my eyes to the whole world, and to knowledge itself. They were the stimulus that kept my brain working over the summers. More importantly, they helped me adopt the philosophy useful in school and beyond, that there is always another way to do something, or to perceive an issue. With uncertainty and doubt, comes innovation and new ways to look at problems that may result in new, different, faster and easier solutions. And all this came from a little “magic,” from a book that many people see as a series for children.

Along with fans and students from many countries, I attended lectures about Ms. Rowling’s ability to beautifully craft the saga, with every painstakingly small detail connected to something else. For example, Dr. John Granger, a “Potter Pundit” who has written several critical and religious-based analyses of the books, reminded the audience that Harry’s (and his mother Lily’s) green eyes owe a literary debt to Dante’s Beatrice. From Jonathan Swift to Chaucer to Dickens and Austin, I learned that like all great books, Rowling’s stories fostered a connection across mind, body, and soul. Although the series has been criticized by those who believe it corrupts children and teaches witchcraft, I was able to hear discussions by those who purported that, like the Bible, these books teach wonderful messages if one goes beyond the literal level to the allegorical. It is my generation’s shared text; all college freshmen are familiar with the stories, and that gives us a set of common beliefs and ideas that can serve as a springboard to new learning.

As I sat surrounded by avid fans and scholars of John Irving, Steven King, and J.K. Rowling, it gave me hope that this country will not be consumed by the mundane. With so much emphasis on physical aspects of life, and the material and sexual focus of the messages thrown at us by the media, it would be easy to become jaded or depressed. But I am not worried. I have been surrounded by 6000 people, all of whom paid good money, not for a sporting event or a concert, but to hear authors read their work. I have evidence that words on a page can change not only my life, but the world.



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peachybeechThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 29 at 9:12 am:

My only critique would be to include some specific examples of how Harry Potter changed your life; I lose that theme somewhere along the way. Great writing, though! Keep it up!

 

 
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fakku said...
Mar. 2 at 7:29 am:

how to make an essay

 

 
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HilidanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 1 at 10:42 am:
Wow! You wrote it very well and how Harry Potter gave a different way to your life. :D
 
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expressionconfessionThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 6 at 11:39 pm:
harry potter rocks, as does the heart of this idea however, keep in mind that it's not a book review, it's a YOU review :) hp is a great springboard for delving into personal experiences & applications of the mindset you adopted from the books, but i didn't see as much of that as i'd have liked to
 
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hey sunny said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 3:39 am:
Very nice I like it.You have told about Harry potter changed you life is was nice. I like it.
 
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Jessica G. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 9:49 am:
I think that this is a great essay and you're a really good writer. It could be better if, when you mention that Harry Potter has changed your life, you give examples as to how it's done that. 
 
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Leonardo. P said...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 6:53 am:
I have to say this essay has some meaning of bias about the media. Sports and concerts have changed lots of people's life and their idea. Although the power of words is facinated but the efficient media will be more and more influential to our life! The key solution towards the problem mentioned in the last few paragraphs should be controlling our own mind and making the peaceful environment in our brain.
 
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Mick said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 12:27 am:
I have to disagree with all the comments saying that the essay doesn't tell the audience about the writer; the subject matter may be Harry Potter, but the essay also paints a picture of the applicant. We get an image of his passion for the series, intellectual curiosity, and appreciation of diversity; all traits colleges are looking for. 
 
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Chase P. said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 8:16 pm:
This essay is good but the part about the sporting events seemed somewhat unnecessary and a little bias since sporting events influence many people.
 
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Alex10 said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 12:38 pm:
Anyways- I'm really not into writting you seem like a crazy good type of writer. My Point is I know a lot of topics to write on about for college essays. You could help me as I could help you. :]
 
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Alex10 said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 12:35 pm:
New but Thirsty for knowledgee
 
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BryanCMU said...
Oct. 8, 2011 at 10:35 pm:
The essay is well written; however, it tells me very little substantive information about the applicant. As a college admission officer, I want to know more about you as a person. It is wonderful that you showed your passion for reading HP novels, but you have shown a very narrow and limited view as to who you are as a person. Focus more on writing an essay that tells me who you are than how well you can write.
 
0110KatieL replied...
Oct. 9, 2011 at 3:04 pm :
Hello, My names Katie and I was wondering if you could tell me alittle bit about what I should put on a college essay, and preferiably what is the most important things, to have on there. I have an strong thirst for knowledge and I would hate to not be able to get into college because of something i missed.
 
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dee8 said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 12:28 pm:
Vocab in essays is fine as long as it doesn't sound pedantic. I didn't pick up on that at all.
 
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Blue Satin said...
Oct. 3, 2011 at 10:51 am:
Im 17 years old, and I think this essay is amazing.  Not only because of the perfect adjectives he used to make it, but also because of the topic he wrote about. It open minds that there is more beyond everything you read if you analyze it. Great essay and great vocab!! Dont let anyone else make you change any part of your essay if its not for good.
 
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Hassan aly said...
Sept. 30, 2011 at 1:18 pm:
i read you article it was fantastic, innovative and very creative piece of writting.
 
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Magikster said...
Sept. 29, 2011 at 9:51 pm:
Astounding play of words! However, it's *"Stephen*, not 'Steven' King. Aside from that, brilliant work!
 
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Suzy2015 said...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 10:41 pm:
I think it was absolutley astounding. Do not let the others down you on your extensive vernacular. If it is you, it is you! I thought it was a beautifully written essay. Well done!
 
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Danny132 said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 8:07 pm:
I gotta say you dont come off as a teen, it sounds more like an intellectual essay thats been edited by a million people but hey, if thats how you really sound then go for it.
read it outloud and if it doesnt sound like you modify it so it so it does.
 
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EnochDreamsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 11:54 am:
Very good. I love Harry potter and actually own a book called "Harry Potter for God". Its some BS. Harry Potter is a story much the same as any other. Religious people just like to gain control over anything they can. Keep up the good writing!
 
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cdmswimmer9 said...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 11:23 pm:
I agree, the essay is good. But you need to take what you wrote and apply to you. And maybe tone down the higher level words, it doesn't sound like a teen wrote it. You might have an extensive vocab but I kind of got muddled in the big words towards the middle. You want to make it easy to read. 
 
EnochDreamsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 11:52 am :
If he is a feshman in college, those are the kind of things he will need right?
 
ItsAshMalThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 9:27 pm :
having a larger vocabulary will only make a college essay more attractive, as far as I've read.
 
cdmswimmer9 replied...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 2:06 am :
You want to seem your age. It's about your voice and truly expressing yourself so that the colleges can get a glimpse at who you are as a person because test scores and grades lack the ability to show that. Throwing in big fancy words can make you seem unreal and fake unless it truly matches your writing style. In this case it doesn't match. You can leave them in, but I suggest really trying to emphasize your actual voice so that colleges don't get the wrong impression. They don't want to be imp... (more »)
 
musicluffler replied...
Sept. 18, 2011 at 6:24 pm :
I had absolutely no problem understanding the essay, and I'm 17.  He sounds exactly like his age and I don't think any phrases in this essay come off as unnatural at all.  Not a single word in this essay is uncommon, with the exception of 'allegorical'.  Perhaps you should take a cue and read more yourself.
 
2oijskl83s replied...
Nov. 5, 2011 at 3:24 pm :
There is no way to say the voice in this essay doesn't match the speaker unless you know him personally. I think the vocabulary is understandable and eloquent and I'm sixteen.
 
Jessica G. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 9:33 am :
I'm fifteen and I understood the essay perfectly. I think you're not giving the writer enough credit. It doesn't seem to me as if they were trying to sound smarter than they are. I thought the good vocabulary showed the writer's unique voice and intellectual curiosity. Isn't that what colleges want in an applicant?
 
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lady red said...
May 13, 2011 at 12:01 pm:

welll i think that harry potter books are sooooooooooooooooooo lame and that are full of lies and crapy fanazy and i hate them they are boaring and preaty fat.... dont get but hurt i just dont like reading... dont take it personalll... j.k laters

 

 
BaabbiiGirll101 replied...
Jun. 7, 2011 at 11:30 am :
i agree with you..harry potter is a very boring subject to write about or even read as a matter of fact
 
kjohn102 replied...
Jun. 13, 2011 at 3:41 am :
Lady red, from the state of your spelling abilities, I'd say it's pretty obvious that you dont like to read. I mean, "boaring".. honestly?? I suggest you re-read the books, you might learn something from them.
 
Jessica G. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 9:37 am :
When you say that you don't like reading in general, no one is going to take your opinion on any book seriously (especially not with that spelling).
 
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Michellex3 said...
Apr. 26, 2011 at 5:31 pm:

"These books opened my eyes to the whole world, and to knowledge itself. They were the stimulus that kept my brain working over the summers. More importantly, they helped me adopt the philosophy useful in school and beyond, that there is always another way to do something, or to perceive an issue. With uncertainty and doubt, comes innovation and new ways to look at problems that may result in new, different, faster and easier solutions. And all this came from a little “magic,” fro... (more »)

 
Michellex3 replied...
Apr. 26, 2011 at 5:34 pm :

OOPS! SORRY! I had just been on a college essay when I was linked over to this, so I thought that this was one too. My bad. Disregard my earlier comment.

 

ANYWAY, as an article, this was really well done! (:

 
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sincerely_annaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 20, 2011 at 4:10 pm:
If words change the world, then soon we're going to have a very different world than the one we live in now. With public education in the U.S. failing a plethora of children, future generations will not have the skills to harness the power of words. In my college essay, which has been posted on this site, I discuss how a single school can be a microcosm of the entired failing system. Check it out, if you'd like.
 
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Vikram K. said...
Apr. 17, 2011 at 3:59 am:
decent essay, lacked a bit of personal touch
 
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ascend said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 9:02 am:
Well written, however, I personally don't see much substance or message in the Harry Potter books and think they can be a waste of time. Unless someone can enlighten me.
 
Jessica G. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 9:44 am :
I wonder if you have really taken the time to read between the lines. I think that the series teaches great lessons about bravery, love, loyalty, and sacrifice. I think it also teaches that it's okay to be different, and that sometimes people that we perceive to be bad are actually afraid or misunerstood.
The substance in most books are going to be what you take out of them, just like any experience in life is what you make of it. If you don't try to look for deeper meanings to things, they... (more »)
 
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xobumblebeex said...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 10:44 am:
Your essay was outstanding! it really makes me want to read the harry potter series. This was amazing! you gave me inspiration.
 
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BitterSweet1993 said...
Mar. 10, 2011 at 8:45 am:
I have never picked up a Harry Potter book and completed it. I have of course watched all the movies. But you make me want ot read them. This was fantastic.
 
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BigJoe92 said...
Feb. 23, 2011 at 12:11 pm:

ENCORE

ENCORE

ENCORE

 
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vestling92This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 20, 2010 at 1:16 pm:
i would take out the very first sentence -- seems a little superfluous. i'd rather see you leap right into the narration.
 
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Mohammad samar said...
Nov. 23, 2010 at 7:41 am:
hey i like your essay,its pretty cool.good job buddy.
 
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crash said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 2:59 pm:
wow what a wonderfull eassy
 
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kyle628 said...
Nov. 7, 2010 at 10:55 pm:
"The Harry Potter series was my gateway drug into my intellectual puberty." I found this hysterical. Awesome essay.
 
devinnmariee replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 6:56 am :

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smiles365This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 3, 2010 at 9:31 pm:
I think its great that you were able to get your point across by finding somethign everybody could relate to (at least all the cool people, because who doesnt like harry potter!) Great work!
 
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Kikuneechan said...
Oct. 30, 2010 at 11:17 am:

Personally, I love Harry Potter and I find it interesting you chose to write and relate to it.

However, I feel as though you're just praising the Harry Potter series...

"Beginning with The Witching Hour in 2005, through Lumos, Prophecy, Portus, and Azkatrz in 2009,"
^ I just see a lot of names.

Also, as someone mentioned, watch the spelling.

"I have evidence that words on a page can change not only my life, but the world."
^ Could you say what again c... (more »)

 
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wolf749 said...
Oct. 26, 2010 at 3:53 pm:
This essay is about harry potter not about an individual. Despite explaining the effect that harry potter had on the author, this places an event in the foreground not a student.
 
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ssdtonoy said...
Oct. 24, 2010 at 10:59 am:
It has always been this way that words leave much power on one than the spoken words.
 
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Alison L. said...
Oct. 4, 2010 at 11:10 am:
I like it, and it really is true about the power of words in a story.
 
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