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     Please describe yourself in 350 words

I hate college essays. In approximately 350 words, I have been asked to explain myself, my likes, my dislikes and my aspirations. In 350 words, I have been asked to show I am better than another applicant. In 350 words, I have been asked to explain the life I have led and the life I hope to lead. With so few words to tell so much, I am faced with a problem: how to use these words wisely.

I could try to impress the admissions board with stories of my 13 years in the Girl Scouts. While I learned to be more selfless and enjoyed the community service, there are thousands of other Girl Scouts around the country, and Girl Scouts Guides around the world whose stories would be similar.

Would discussing my experience and leadership skills I gained from being part of my high school’s newspaper set me apart? While I discovered how to work as part of a team and got a taste of real-world journalism through job shadowing and interaction with journalists, lots of high schools have a newspaper with staffs who have similar experiences and so, again, I would not stand out.

If I talked about my love for music, and how it has changed the way I view the world, perhaps I could be defined. I could explain my love for my favorite bands and how they have prompted me to think more deeply about my surroundings, and consider things at more than face value. Fortunately for the bands I love, I am not the only fan at their concerts; hundreds of other inspired teens dance to the music with me.

On paper, it is almost impossible to tell myself apart from my peers. Although I may appear to be a stereotypical teenager, I have learned enough about myself in my 17 years to know that I am more than 350 words. I am a good friend, a hard worker and a funny person. I’d love to tell you more, but this makes 333.

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Lily">This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 1:48 am
i love this !
Yld777 said...
Feb. 21, 2017 at 7:37 am
very nice i really liked how you used your title with your story.
SheenaHinton34 said...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 7:40 pm
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PaperIdeas said...
Aug. 8, 2011 at 1:06 pm
I like your style of writing...I'm applying for a boarding high school right now, and I'm facing the exact same problem with all my essays. We're just a bunch of stereotypes...
Kisip_Typical-Islander said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 5:11 pm
You wrote this piece very well. It shares that general perception of 'what-makes-you-stand-out' idea, the frustration behind writing college papers on demand, and a specific feeling behind self-discovery and self-reflection. Nice job!
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