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Nisa A.
Summary: To Ryan, love had always seemed like such a simple thing. Something easy to find, easy to hold onto. But he soon came to realize that the only person he could really, truly love was the girl who had always belonged to someone else. To her, he was just the shoulder to cry on, the best friend. He had hoped and hoped that if he stuck with her, put up with all the drama, picked up the Ben & Jerry's when she was sad, and beat up all the ex-boyfriends who broke her heart, that one day she would finally realize how he felt. That one day, maybe, just maybe, he could make her his.

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BrandonTaylorsgirl said...
Mar. 13, 2012 at 8:43 am
i can relate to the character in your story a lot
KierstenMarie said...
Nov. 24, 2011 at 10:57 am

I enjoyed reading it. It was sweet and I hope to read more.

Please read and leave comments on my stories. It would be greatly appreciated. :)

Jurdibird said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 12:24 pm
This is cute! I love the male main character, he is such a sweetie!
love2love17 said...
Oct. 15, 2011 at 6:37 am
Oh, this is beautiful! I can't wait to read more!! Great job. There were a few grammatical errors, but otherwise it was great! :) Let us know when you have more!
TanazMasaba This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 15, 2011 at 10:15 am



I mean seriously, even though the girl sounds like a total idiot, I love the guy and the plot. But I'll praise you later, lets get the criticism out of the way.


umm...there wasn't much problem with your sentence structures.....not a single spelling mistake (two thumbs for that!).....your details and description of not just the narrator but also the surroundings was perfect and not too... (more »)


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