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A Tragic Love Story

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Author's note: This is actually a 'text-story' my boyfriend and i wrote, and i formalized for a writing class.
Author's note: This is actually a 'text-story' my boyfriend and i wrote, and i formalized for a writing class.  « Hide author's note
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Chapter 1: His Story

I was walking across a large field. I had no idea where I was, or how I really got there. I heard the ocean in the distance, off to my left and slightly ahead of me. Suddenly I saw a girl walking towards the sound. She looks like she was searching for something. “Hey!” I yelled, waving and turning towards her. She stopped and looked at me. “What’s your name?” I ask, walking towards her. She turns and starts running again, faster this time. “Hey! Slow down!” I run, trying to catch up.
This is the first part of the first chapter from his perspective. Originally i planned to write the story featuring both sides at the same time, but that proved too difficult and i had a deadline. Comment to see more of his side!
Jeeze she’s fast. “Go away,” she yells over her shoulder. “Who are you?” I ask, breathless. “You don’t stand a chance out here.” She’s pulling ahead of me. “How do you know?” I pant, “We haven’t even met yet! Can you stop for a moment?” I bend over, panting harder. She keeps running ahead of me. S**t. “Wait! I just want to know who you are! Just stop! Please?” I start running towards her again. The sound of the waves is closer, and there’s a cliff coming up. “Stop following me.” She’s running towards the cliff, not even slowing down. “STOP!” I yell in surprise, “You’re going to fall!” “Just watch me!” She yells. A split second later she jumps over the edge, squealing in fear.
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endend1210 said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 2:42 pm:
...I don't understand how this book is top voted.
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Timekeeper This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 1:01 pm:

You should resubmit this under the novels section since it is a novel and not a nonfiction book. I love it though


Please check out my novel "SuperNOVA" under the novels tab!

xX_so-confused_Xx replied...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 11:26 am :
Well i need to get around to writing "his" part, then it'll be more book-like lol
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