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Jims Life

December 18, 2014
By eddie cortes, SanDiego, California
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Chapter 1

Jim is in his small room and he is playing video games with the volume up and music on talking to his friends on the headset having fun.He has posters up on his wall and the fan hanging. his room is dirty and messier than usual.He cleans his room and finally It smells fresh and also not messy.Then he continues to have fun and keeps on playing his game’s. He lives in San diego Ca, with his mom and two sisters.

When Jim was in middle school he had problems at home and at school, his dad didn’t care about him, he was never there for Jim and he never gave him anythIng. Even though Jim was a nice guy people never got to see the real person he was, they only saw the anger he expressed through his actions and harsh words. Jim always had problems wherever he went. When he was alone he would cry because of the problems that he had, and the anger he felt. His emotions came out when he was alone, and he would remember everything that happened. One day he met a girl that was named Tiffany she was a nice girl who had problems they called her names and she also had problems at home like Jim. when Jim talked to her they became friends and always talked in lunch to each other. Jim always helped Tiffany with her problem.

The next day at school Jim saw Tiffany cry he went up to her and asked “why are u crying Jim said” Tiffany said  “Its just that my boyfriend broken up with me” Tiffany told Jim. When Jim talked to Tiffany felt better and gave Him a hug, She asked Him If he wanted to hang out at the library with her friends. Jim said “yes I would like to” He said, Tiffany responded “ok then lets go”. When they arrived at the library they had fun After that friends went home and Jim wanted to walk Tiffany home because she asked him to walk with.

Tiffany is a person who likes to have fun she is a person that Jim gets along with.  She is smart and funny she could be mean sometimes but she is a nice person that gives a good example with other kids. Jim he always liked to get in trouble by doing bad things  he liked to do because of bad Influences.  fun when he Jim has hangs with his true friends. There names are Diego and Pedro. They are cool tall guys that are both Fourteen and that are very smart and help Jim with his homework.

Jim’s friends give a good example of good behavior but he always does bad things. But Jim does good deeds when It comes to volunteer work, Jim loves to work. One day Jim went to the back of the house where another house that was attached to Jim house. and Jim’s family members lived in the authorhouse where he saw his uncle that was fixing things  like washers,dryers,refrigerators,cooking good food like If you're at a restaurant. He also fixes cars generators stoves houses etc. then he asked Jim If he wanted to help Him Jim said yeah would like to and his uncle showed Him how to fix things.

The next day Jim’s uncle was going to go do a job and Jim asked him and his uncle said yes so after they arrived to the job his uncle told him not to touch anything as Jim said ok and contInued to look at how his uncle was fixing the washer and dryer. Jim’s uncle needed help so Jim helped him so did and finally Jim and his uncle finished fixing the washer and the dryer. Jim felt proud when he helped his uncle. Jim’s uncle told Him If he wanted to work with him Jim was so happy that he couldn't say no. because Jim always wanted to work so he can have his own money to buy what he wants.

So everyday after school when he finishes his home work and eat he goes to work with his uncle. Jim doesn't know that much of fixing things  but he does know more about electronIcs when his uncle needed help Jim helped with the electrical stuff. After Jim finished working he opened his room door slammed the door and went to sleep exhausted and grouchy. When he woke up he was getting ready for school and he was so rusty he couldn't think he was not thinking straight he felt like If he was ashes flying away.

Jim saw tiffany and she asked Jim If he was ok and Jim said that he was fine. When the bell rang Tiffany asked Jim “what happen to you when you were a kid” and Jim looked and said “something's bad that I don't want to talk about It” Jim said to Tiffany. On tuesday Tiffany wrote a letter to Jim about what happened to her when she was little Jim started to cry and he wrote a letter back and Tiffany started to cry they were going back and forth with writing letters. After a few days tiffany left the school because they called her names and those names that they called her where bad and she crIed and thats why she left school.

Chapter 2


The next day Tiffany stayed after school and was talking to Jim and asked Him If he wanted to hang out one day. When Tiffany left school Jim was sad because he liked her and he never got the chance to tell her that.Jim sat down always thinking negative and not listening to his teachers when they tell Him to do something as bad.

Days,weeks and months went by It was graduatIon day but Jim didn't graduate he just passed whIch was still good but didn’t graduate with his best friends. Jim was happy that he passed but he was upset he didn't graduate. When he went home he told his mom with excitement and said “Mom look I passed eighth grade”. It was summer vacation and Jim was excIted and ready to have fun he brought his friend to come and hang out with at his house.  They had fun playing games and eating and relaxing It was always fun in the summer and playing out side was fun there were also some arguments but still Jim and Pedro had fun.  they hung out one more time before school starts. Jim taught Pedro how to fix washers. And after that day Jim and Pedro started to work together and listen to what each other have to say so they can fix things  without breaking them.

Jim remembered what had happened to Him when he was a little kid he talk to Tiffany the next day and told her everything that happened to Him when he was little. before Jim told he he invited her go go eat at a fancy place called Salvadors, it is next to the beach, so you can smell the salt in the air and hear the waves crashing against the rocks. The restaurant is famous for it’s seafood. Jim loved going there when he could afford to spend the 75.00 dollars that steak and lobster cost, but that meant that he would have to cut back spending on something else.    

When Jim was little his sisters dad come home all mad and he asked Jim to serve Him water and Jim did but when Jim dropped It on Him It was an accident he got mad grabbed Jim and took Him to the kItchen Jim tried to run but It made It worse he pussed Jim on the floor and started kicking Him Jim couldn't breath he thought he was going to dIe his mom and sisters told Him to stop but he kept kicking and kicking and kicking when Jim's mom called the cops he ran away and took his car.He came back in the night and asked for his stuff but Immediately Jim's mom called the cops again he ran away and left the car on with the door open the cops arrived and took the car then  the cops came and said that they didn't find Him.

his brother told Jim's mom that he left back where he use to live in mexicalI. When he told Tiffany she started crying the next day Jim went to work with his uncle and Jim had a hard time paying attentIon he got back to work. The next day Jim got  ready so he could go with his friends to the movies after the movies they all want home It was still sunny so Jim decided to take a walk all the way to downtown and logan and go back home. After that walk Jim was tired and hungry he want home and ate food after that he went to sleep.

Jim hasn't  seen his friend in weeks because his friend Diego was moving to kentucky or nebraska so Jim helped Him pack after two weeks Jim and Diego where done with packing his and his moms and brothers stuff. then my friend Pedro came so he could say goodbye we talked about the good times that Jim and Pedro had  said goodbye and thats when he left. Jim and Pedro told Him that one day Jim and Pedro wIll go to Kentucky frIed chIcken university to look for Him.

when Pedro and Jim left to Pedro's house they were playing games and helping clean after that they got tired they went to sleep the next day. Pedro and Jim ate breakfast and after they were done they played for a little bit then when Pedros dad came he gave Jim a ride home. Jim got ready for a bIrthday party and waIted for his friends to come and pick Him up so that he could go. when they came Jim left when they arrived to the party

they had fun and they did fun things  like every party is. when the party was over they dropped Jim off at home and Jim went to sleep. Jim had fun the next day he slept at his cousin's house and they played games after that she told Jim scary stories about things  that happened Jim was scared and tried to go to sleep.

Jim couldn't sleep so he stayed up all night dramatIzed hoping that he could go to sleep in the morning. Jim woke up and ate breakfast and watch tv Jim's cousin woke up and asked why are you up they started to play. One day when Jim stayed the night at his cousins house and played with his online buddy. Jim stayed up all night playing video games and couldn't stop laughing at the funny things they did. so early,Jim responded “paranoid” Jim’s cousin started to laugh. And Jim said told her that It wasn’t funny Jim’s cousin told Him that It was for here then I asked her If she wanted to play the playstatIon 3 and

         

When the sun was up Jim mad some things to eat and after he finished eating he went back to play games with his friend. When his cousin woke up she asked Jim "why are u up so early" Jim respond I stayed up all night playing video games after Jim got tired of playing. He went to sleep and when he woke up and it was night and Jim started playing again. Jim played for hours and hours and hours then  he stopped playing games for a week. the next day was the last day of summer vacation  and thats when everything's changed that’s when Jim,Pedro,

Diego and Tiffany where going to high school.

they all said goodbye one last time then they left separate ways and before they left they said that on day they will hang out and have fun like the old days. and Jim had a happy life like he wanted to have.



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