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A Revolver … MAG

September 23, 2014
By kellz1602 SILVER, Buenos Aires, Other
kellz1602 SILVER, Buenos Aires, Other
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"Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind. -Dr. Seuss


Compares itself to burdens of her lip
with dirty bullets shooting out of range.
They puncture hearts and wreck all souls with change
of soon to be a past relationship.
Revolver spirits fit more like her soul,
as she, untouched, can cause a broken heart
for she’s not scared of what might cause
her part;
she cares no more of living like a whole.
But to her words for sure I give no blame,
since it’s her past, the one that caused
the break;
That broken heart of hers now hides
in shame.
She thinks that truth prevents another ache.
To her love lied, so now for truth she aims
with her revolver mouth, for mistakes’ sake.



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on Jan. 30 2015 at 11:27 am
Nated315 DIAMOND, Georgetown, New York
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Truth has many shades. It's not a matter of black and white, but many grays.

A sonnet should go from 12 lines of negativity to last two lines of positivity, or visa versa, but its pretty good.