Jamming With Bob Marley

April 21, 2012
By Smile-And-Wave-Boys. SILVER, Rotherhithe, Other
Smile-And-Wave-Boys. SILVER, Rotherhithe, Other
8 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everyone wants to ride with you in the limo, but what you want is someone who will take the bus with you when the limo breaks down."
— Oprah Winfrey


Yesterday,
I was listening to Bob Marley,
Smoking it,
Preaching it,
Telling me to be happy
He said
Don’t worry about those girls
Who always seem to whisper ‘bout me
Mutter
Mutter
Mutter
Like they know my life story

This little bird just got her wings
While I’m taking off
Be singing bout,
All my blessings
So this is my message to you
Might not be the sweetest
But at least I know that
My melodies true


So I’ll just be-

Jamming with Bob Marley
Just singing with the rising sun
I won’t run I’ll fly
Don’t worry bout me
Got a little feeling
I’ll be alright

Jamming with Bob Marley
Dead and gone, hardly
Jamming with Bob Marley
Just jamming with Bob Marley

Jamming with Bob Marley
Dead and gone, hardly
Jamming with Bob Marley
Just jamming with Bob Marley!



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DanielM. said...
on May. 5 2012 at 8:04 pm
Awesome!! great job!!!

on May. 5 2012 at 6:36 pm
PurpOreos SILVER, Macomb, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Keep smiling...Because life is a beautiful thing. And there is so much to smile about!
"Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing" Benjamin Franklin

Love it, I was Jammin with this Poem!

My Favorite!


on Apr. 24 2012 at 3:12 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

When I saw Bob Marley in your song's title, I was intrigued:) No critcisms here---I don't know much about songwriting, but this seems like a cool song. I do know that it would work also as a poem.

on Apr. 23 2012 at 12:00 am
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1648 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by." --Douglas Adams

"The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane." --Marcus Aurelius

Beautiful!  I love how you incorporate Bob Marley into your song and use him to send a message.  I really have no criticism; this is one of the best songs I've seen here on TI!  It looks like it was written by a professional.


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