You're Mine

August 6, 2009
By distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
distant_dreamer GOLD, Belmont, New Hampshire
12 articles 6 photos 498 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's a climb, but the view is great!"


Verse 1:


When you’ve lost your way,
And you don’t know which path to take; Just reach for my hand, and I’ll show you the way
When the storm of life brings you farther than you want to go
Reach for my hand, and I’ll never let go.

Chorus:
When the rain falls,
when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Verse 2:

When trials seem to rip up your dreams,
Don’t give up, and don’t give in
Don’t let Satan win.
Remember that I’m fighting by your side,
So never run and never hide!

Chorus:

When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine,
oh you’re mine!

Sometimes things happen that we can’t understand,
But call out to the Father,
take Him by the hand!

Chorus:
When the rain falls, when the sky is dark
Don’t be scared, I’ll be there
And I’ll never depart.
From right now, to the end of time
I will always be there, and you’ll be just fine, cause your mine, oh you’re mine!

You will always be mine!


The author's comments:
Hi everyone! This is my very fist song that I have ever written!! I hope that you all like this song, and I would Really appreciate it if you could rate and comment, I really want to know how everyone thinks of this! Thanks again!!!

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Eswzem BRONZE said...
on May. 15 at 10:46 am
Eswzem BRONZE, New Castle, Pennsylvania
4 articles 9 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
“For I have a plan for you. A plan to give you peace not for disaster, but a plan to give you hope and a future.” -Our Heavenly Father

I love this so much. Wonderful job.

window said...
on Apr. 19 at 11:41 am
window,
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
LETS GO!

awsome cool i know i can't do that

InkyOwl BRONZE said...
on Mar. 7 at 8:56 pm
InkyOwl BRONZE, Bloomington, Indiana
3 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where Words fail, Music speaks.
~Hans Christian Anderson

This is an AMAZING song! I just had surgery, and after I read this I was singing it all day. Great encouragement, and VERY well written! :)

on Feb. 13 at 1:57 pm
CaprisunBrisk BRONZE, Sacramento , California
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Good job :) Very descriptive language.

Sha.Johns said...
on Dec. 15 2017 at 2:32 pm
Sha.Johns, PERRY, Iowa
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
I don't care about what the other people say about this because you got talent ad don't let anybody tell you differently.

Fantastic poem,very nice

on Nov. 28 2017 at 11:09 am
tootiesfruties,
0 articles 0 photos 4 comments
shut up no one cares your to positive

on Nov. 28 2017 at 11:08 am
tootiesfruties,
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@Maruchan you suck eggs

on Nov. 28 2017 at 11:08 am
tootiesfruties,
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my heart beats like a drum and my head hurts like if I was hit by a drum stick

on Nov. 28 2017 at 11:06 am
tootiesfruties,
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@tootiesfruties you suck eggs

on May. 25 2017 at 5:08 pm
Just.Another.Girl SILVER, West Plains, Missouri
5 articles 2 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why fit in when you were born to stand out? -Dr.Seuss

God has given you amazing talent. Keep it up and I can't wait to hear more from you!

on May. 8 2017 at 3:23 pm
invisible_to_all BRONZE, Corning, California
2 articles 0 photos 11 comments
wow so cool

on Mar. 13 2017 at 10:39 pm
eshaansoman SILVER, Hillsborough, New Jersey
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Great job! I want to read more! What tune is this song meant to be sang in?

on Mar. 1 2017 at 12:13 pm
LarrizaCarrillo BRONZE, Chandler, Arizona
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"if i go nonstop , im luckly to miss no shots"

wow this is awsome i would love to see more and maybe do some type of business with you

on Dec. 8 2016 at 1:25 pm
ramosfreddy BRONZE, Sacramento, California
1 article 0 photos 8 comments
it was amazing keep up the good work!!!! hope to see more like this one i like the lyrics

Jannee BRONZE said...
on Dec. 2 2016 at 7:54 pm
Jannee BRONZE, Clinton, Utah
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
Oh my goodness! That was so amazing!Keep it up. I really loved reading this. You have some amazing talent! (:

lmckenney said...
on Nov. 3 2016 at 8:21 am
This absolutely amazing you have so much great talent!!

on Oct. 1 2016 at 8:19 am
This ia amazing!! Honestly it describes exactly how I feel about my adorable little sister! You have so much talent!

on Oct. 1 2016 at 8:19 am
This ia amazing!! Honestly it describes exactly how I feel about my adorable little sister! You have so much talent!

Gl0sd13 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 25 2016 at 11:22 am
Gl0sd13 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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This is AMAZING




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