Grandma Limerick

i tthink this is halarious <333

This is fab. I love the juxtapose of using such a warm term of endearment and showing the dark reality simultaneously. Haven't read a lim this good since Revolting Rhymes!

I really liked your poem, and how it showed that not all grandmas are as nice as they may seem. When I read your poem, I found that it was a short limerick. Within the limerick, I found some similies such as, "Though as mean as a witch.”

Lol, I kind of like this.

this poem is horrible. i hope your grandma doesnt know about this, she'd disown you hardcore. i hate this. it made my eyes bleed

I like that it's short, sweet, and to the point. Too often poets elongate a poem just because they think length is more. I'm here to tell you it's not. The amount of words in a poem neither increases nor decreases the value and meaning of the piece. I also like that this poem is comical but still had some depth to it. Well done author and I would be thrilled to see moreof your work. :]

I enjoyed reading this correct limerick because it showed that not all old people are nice like my grandma and i loved the rhyme scheme

LOL THTS GOOD

hmmm leaves u thinking...good peoetry! KEEP WRITITNG! i'd love to hear your opinion on my work!

this kind of reminds me of the song "Grandma got ran over by a reindeer" for some reason... i guess it's because old people do funny things... read some of mine?

Very funny. I liked it a lot. Imaginative. I like that a lot, too. I love the whole poem.

This poem was wicked funny I liked it.

lol super funny!

haha i like this

i woveee this one . as i was reading this i was like singing it in my head. (:

Oh, my goodness, this is incredible! Keep writing, because you are very good at it!

This was a very good poem! I enjoyed reading it. When i read it i thought about my grandme!

wow this is amazingg.