The View MAG

October 2, 2011
By Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments

You've got me smiling nonstop,
Laughing like a child
You are beautiful, wonderful,
Free-spirited and wild

I'd climb a mountain
As long as you are there
And when we're up
I'll stop and stare

Not at the trees
Or at the view
But at the stunningly breathtaking,
Beautiful you.



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on Feb. 17 2014 at 6:33 pm
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Can't keep my eyes from the circling sky,
Tongue-tied and twisted
Just an earth-bound misfit, I"
~Pink Floyd

"Now is blessed
The rest
remembered "

~Jim Morrison

THis is so pretty! I love this! Great job! :)

on Jan. 5 2013 at 6:08 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments
Thank you!!!

on Jan. 5 2013 at 10:45 am
WaffleOcean2934 PLATINUM, Rogers, Minnesota
42 articles 9 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams-Eleanor Roosevelt

I really like this poem!  I think it has a great rhythm and flow to it.  Nice work on it!  :)

on Mar. 7 2012 at 2:17 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments
thank you! means a lot!

on Mar. 7 2012 at 2:16 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
226 articles 4 photos 241 comments
thank you so much

on Mar. 6 2012 at 11:26 pm
lovemenot PLATINUM, Port Angeles, Washington
29 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My names Red and Im an alcoholic."~Red, Shark Night 3D

This piece is amazing. Simple but refined, perfect. I also admire the way you made the view to be a person. Well done.

on Jan. 26 2012 at 5:24 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
35 articles 0 photos 1401 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

I love the way you personified the view as a person~ this describes just the way a beautiful view can make someone feel.




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