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I wish for one thing
As I blow out these candles,
And it's having you
By my side.





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moderndayEmilyDickinson This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 5, 2014 at 11:58 am
Haha, a quote came in mind. "Learn the rules, then break them like a pro." I think it was Picasso. I found this sweet, full of emotion, wonderful, and all together amazing. Great job! Thank you for sharing this.
 
Liv.HarrisThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 30, 2014 at 7:43 pm
This is great!! I love the emotion IU could feel when I read those short lines :) I especially like the author's note lol. In order to succeed you must break the rules, but to break the rules, you must master them. Well done!
 
fallenoutofgrace replied...
Aug. 4, 2014 at 10:55 pm
Love this. Don't worry rules were made to be broken and you broke it masterfully. I oove the speakers emotion its just Ahhh Perfect! Amazing, Amazing job
 
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