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The slow dimming sky
Covered by wispy shadows
Of what isn't there





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Tallerthantrees This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 30, 2014 at 12:11 pm
This poem speaks volumes. In such a simple, short way I feel like you have conveyed such emotion. Congratulations on a beautiful piece of work. 
 
TaylorWintryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 5, 2014 at 5:09 pm
Thanks for the feedback!
 
thewriter247 said...
Jun. 23, 2013 at 3:19 pm
Very nice! It's very short but poems don't need to be long to have meaning. <3
 
TaylorWintryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 9:10 pm
Thanks again! (:
 
dragonfly95 said...
May 29, 2013 at 1:23 pm
This is a good poem though the last line threw me. would you mind checking out my poem ''steady beating'' ? thanks in advance :)
 
TaylorWintryThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jun. 24, 2013 at 9:11 pm
Sorry I couldn't get back to you sooner. And I'd be glad to! (: Thanks for the feedback.
 
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