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Golden Kiss

April 11, 2011
By emanmkhan SILVER, Austin, Texas
emanmkhan SILVER, Austin, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"People will forget what you said. People will forget what you did. But people will never forget how you made them feel.\" Maya Angelou


Sparkling golden drops,
On lips of roses so dear,
Touching with my soul.


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so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 15 2012 at 8:48 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Very well written! Beautiful job! Please read,rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

kat2.0 SILVER said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 12:18 pm
kat2.0 SILVER, Sparrowbush, New York
5 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is short so go for it

Great poem it's very well written

on Jul. 17 2011 at 11:38 am
emanmkhan SILVER, Austin, Texas
7 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"People will forget what you said. People will forget what you did. But people will never forget how you made them feel.\" Maya Angelou

Thank you! I tried to make a point tht love is unexplainable, yet a wonderful feeling....

on Jul. 16 2011 at 6:58 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

I didn't really understand this, but it had nice imagery and the words sounded good together. It had a nice flow!

on Jul. 14 2011 at 10:36 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
23 articles 3 photos 198 comments

Favorite Quote:
eARTh

My poetry does not exactly make total sense all the time ether, a lot of famous poets work makes no sense to me. I think poetry, at least to me, is a lot of feelings that maybe only the author will truly understand. Everyone can have there own impersination of that poem that way!

on Jul. 14 2011 at 3:23 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
1 article 0 photos 202 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

I agree with Express-- that the meaning isn't clear, but I think it's perfect just the way it is. Sometimes poetry doesn't need to make perfect sense to be lovely. :)

on May. 19 2011 at 3:12 pm
Express-- PLATINUM, River Vale, New Jersey
30 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is what happens while you're busy making other plans"







-John Lennon

Nice imagery, but I'm struggling to understand what the poem means,;