Angels MAG

August 1, 2009
By Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
83 articles 0 photos 435 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi


Everybody knows
Angels cannot fly for long
With broken feathers



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hairy said...
on Sep. 13 2016 at 7:04 pm
hairy,
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sorry what i mean is don't force yourself to stop cause you want to make a haiku or anything else just let it come as you go it seems like the best way at least to me to make a great poem not that i'm saying it's not good because it is so far, keep going

hairy said...
on Sep. 13 2016 at 6:46 pm
hairy,
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not to be mean but that's it that's all your gonna write, i agree it's true cause it's common sense but, that's it. this poem sounds unfinished you should try to continue it and make it make more sense.

Merveille GOLD said...
on Jun. 23 2015 at 1:10 pm
Merveille GOLD, Fulham, Other
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very true. you can rewrite it. Everybody knows birds cannot fly for long With broken feathers hasn't got same affect lol

Thefinessor said...
on May. 15 2015 at 9:39 am
Thefinessor, Wichita, Kansas
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Neither can birds

dinks PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 16 2013 at 2:52 pm
dinks PLATINUM, Hinsdale, Illinois
28 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
"and kisses are a better faith than freedom"

Love the message that was portrayed in only three lines, great poem!

micky3232 said...
on Sep. 24 2013 at 12:42 pm
i think this is really amazing i love writing haikus myself :) keep writing :)

on Feb. 14 2013 at 11:19 pm
TheSkyOwesMeRain GOLD, Irvine, California
13 articles 1 photo 303 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take, but by the moments which take your breath away.

You are only as strong as your weakest link.

Wonderful, I love it!

on Sep. 1 2012 at 1:31 pm
KnitsandPurls GOLD, Mahtomedi, Minnesota
13 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I cannot live without books"
--Thomas Jefferson

Wow. That's all I can say. <closes gaping jaw with hand>

on Apr. 23 2011 at 4:40 pm
Norma-Bernard GOLD, Moosic, Pennsylvania
14 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When a door closes, somewhere out there a window opens."

Hahaha idk u but we both live in moosic! Anywho, this is FANTASTIC! i <3 your work! please check out mine! 5 stars all the way. Keep it up!

baby girl said...
on Nov. 2 2010 at 12:03 pm
i like that saying

on Sep. 29 2010 at 7:56 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
40 articles 2 photos 1634 comments

Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

A very interesting piece... It's very beautiful although it appears to be so simple. I like the obvious way that this is stated "everybody knows..." I find it strange but creative that you chose to say broken feathers instead of wings.

on Aug. 11 2009 at 8:00 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
26 articles 0 photos 493 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

love this. haiku are so difficult. I've done a few but haven't put them on here.

really, though, every word means something. well done!!

on Aug. 11 2009 at 7:14 pm
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
30 articles 0 photos 273 comments
lol, lol, i saw my one of my favorite short stories that you wrote on the HOME PAGE!! I'm not sure if they pick ones that are the most popular, but when I saw THE MIRROR under fiction on the HOME PAGE, I was like GASP!! I know this one, i know this one! Over excitement... I guess I really like THE MIRROR because I really relate to it. And, yeah. when I saw how many comments I posted under THE MIRROR, I kinda felt I had too many... so yeah...

SaraB. GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2009 at 12:53 pm
SaraB. GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
12 articles 6 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Whatever you are, be a good one" Abraham Lincoln

Wow that was really amazing. I try haiku, but it never gets that deep. Really well done. (Thanks for the comment!)

on Aug. 9 2009 at 4:31 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
iam the greatest dork!!

great job

hcosmob SILVER said...
on Aug. 9 2009 at 4:10 pm
hcosmob SILVER, Sedona, Arizona
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this is so great. amazinggggg

on Aug. 7 2009 at 12:27 pm
Leena7395 SILVER, Spring Grove, Illinois
8 articles 0 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be who you are because those who matter don't mind, and those who mind don't matter.

Aw, I love it! My grandmother is always saying stuff like this about angels and heaven. Great job!

on Aug. 6 2009 at 9:25 pm
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
30 articles 0 photos 273 comments
this makes me wonder if angels could go to God and get new wings... okok, i'm going to everything you have written and reading it.




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