January 4, 2016
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but through the dark
there is light
though i’m trying to hide


through my heart
i can’t find
what has yet to be tried


even if
i go far
i can’t live anymore
so i guess i’ll just run away.

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guard-girl said...
Feb. 10, 2016 at 10:35 pm
This totally encapsulates Kylo Ren! :) This also makes me think of antagonistic characters that realize the error of their ways, and are confused by their feelings. In particular, it reminds me of a character named Hrathen from the book Elantris by Brandon Sanderson as well as Kylo Ren. Have you read it? The poem is awesome, and you perfectly captured the mind of Kylo Ren Solo :)
Allen. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 11, 2016 at 9:22 pm
Ooh, no, I haven't... But I'm going to have to now ;u; And thank you for commenting! I'm glad you like this poem... I really did my best.
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