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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on Jun. 30 at 8:50 am
WritingTheWriteWay PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"They laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at them because they're all the same"(Kurt Cobain).

Exqusite poem, I feel your pain, my father passed away when I was four. I have a bunch of half siblings, but no full ones. It makes it worse because I just feel so alone in my situation, I would say I miss him, but I don't remeber him. I wish I had solething to miss.

on Jun. 16 at 4:58 pm
Shrivastava SILVER, Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself no matter what they say

That's so sad but thats what makes it so special.
I am so emotional after reading it. I feel bad for you

on May. 15 at 8:55 am
PunderfullyMade BRONZE, Elizabethton, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"I want to see my little boy!" ("Here he comes!") "I want to see my little boy!" -Vine

I love it! I can relate. Your word choice is simply beautiful :).

on May. 8 at 1:13 pm
Noamisalami519 SILVER, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"The history of hitherto society is the history of class struggles."
-Karl Marx

This is super powerful

on Mar. 1 at 12:20 pm
TabithaL SILVER, Suffolk, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Speak only if it improves upon the silence"- Mahatma Gandhi

Your tone and language and voice all work so well together. I'm amazed. Good job.

on Feb. 22 at 1:13 pm
MaddieGrizz SILVER, Lake Isabella, California
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Favorite Quote:
Even though I walk through the darkest valley I will fear no evil. Psalm 23:4, For I know the plans I have for you declares the Lord. Plans to prosper you, not harm you plans to give you hope and a future. Jeremiah 29:11

Wow this is powerful and emotional I love it! I can relate to losing someone it's rough I know. Your writing is flawless. If you can, please look at my poem called reality.

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on Feb. 9 at 9:26 am
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.
-Eminem

You can't see me
-John Cena

Ooh, somebody stop me!
-Mask

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on Jan. 18 at 8:37 am
Elizabeth2001 BRONZE, Durand, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
“Your hardest times often lead to the greatest moments of your life. Keep going. Tough situations build strong people in the end.”

This made me cry because I can relate to losing my mother and hearing people say they hate they're mothers and I just want to be like a least you have on to come home to. You should keep writing you did a good job.

Fantastic poem,very nice

on Sep. 8 2017 at 2:05 pm
Breezette DIAMOND, Uniontown, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
Every Time I even think of you, all those bad memories just fade away, 'cause your smile's enough, you're enough...

That is the best poem ever, like for real.

on Jul. 26 2017 at 11:25 am
EmpressPenn SILVER, Hoschton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"For every 60 seconds you spend on a negative emotion, its a minute of happiness you'll never be able to get back in life!" - EmpressPenn

*snaps* that is DEEP!!

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on Jul. 4 2017 at 6:50 am
Ssneha SILVER, Kathmandu, Other
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Wow. I really love this.

on Apr. 12 2017 at 1:02 pm
Isabell_Pilarski BRONZE, Brown City, Michigan
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Love it.It's amazing

on Apr. 7 2017 at 4:44 pm
HereSheIs BRONZE, Wellesley, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"We can easily forgive a child who is afraid of the dark; the real tragedy of life is when men are afraid of the light." -Plato

Woah I love it. So emotional and perfect, especially the lines about her glasses

on Dec. 8 2016 at 1:28 pm
Jenifer_cornejo SILVER, Sacramento, California
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wow this is really great you used very good description ,imagery , very good hook and ending.

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on Oct. 13 2016 at 11:08 pm
ZOEDETTMER, Sydeny, Other
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GREAT JOB XXXXX

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on Oct. 13 2016 at 11:08 pm
Ebony.A BRONZE, Central Coast, Other
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Whatever floats your boat.

This is very emotional and deep. I love the feels it gives me.

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on Oct. 13 2016 at 11:06 pm
ZOEDETTMER, Sydeny, Other
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SO GOOD, I HAD SO MANY EMOTIONS GOING THROUGH ME JUST COULD'NT PUT A HANDLE ON IT XXXX

on Oct. 13 2016 at 11:06 pm
ChelseaRowley, New South Wales, Other
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so many emotions in one poem omg cant handle it!xxx

fatcakes said...
on Oct. 13 2016 at 10:53 pm
that is very deep and personal. thank you or sharing. that was a great poem




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