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Just Make Up Your Mind

May 12, 2014
By angel_of_silence PLATINUM, Cotulla, Texas
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angel_of_silence PLATINUM, Cotulla, Texas
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“The boy never cried again, and he never forgot what he'd learned: that to love is to destroy, and that to be loved is to be the one destroyed.” -Jace Wayland City of Bones

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Alright, I think it’s time
That I said something
Why can’t you just
Please make up your mind

I’m so tired of all
The confusion it’s killing me
I mean you tell me you like me
But then you say that you love her
Just make up your mind

You text me to say hi
You send me cute messages
You tell me quotes
From teen romances
Just make up your mind

When we hang out
Sometimes we hold hands
You joke with me
And you give me pet names
Just please make up your mind

I feel myself falling
I am deeply in like with you
I want to tell you badly
That I want you to be mine
Just please, please make up your mind

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

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Shade3043 DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 1 2014 at 10:55 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

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I sorta like the repitition. I think that there are WAY too many uses of "you" and "me" in this poem. Try to be a little more creative with your wording. Unless it's a little bit of a concept, do not put random breaks in lines. It's alright, though. I give it an average rating of 3/5
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 20 2014 at 2:22 pm
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" Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)"
"Don't go where the path leads you. Go instead where there's no path and leave a trail ;)"-R.W.Emerson

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That is really nice!! Sad of course but beautifully written. And after all who knows?! May be this person will make up its mind and the answer will make you happier. So just keep believing in yourself and never stop writing. Thanks for sharing this ^_^