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The sun covers my face
But the warmth..
It passes me by
To carry petals
In their dance

Skin and bone
Have nothing more to say
Tears of sweat
Go up in smoke

Crack to crunch
Doesn't matter
Frozen dreams won't stop their fall
Just the way it is

I don't feel
I've gone numb
Let me howl in peace

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jacey_poo_girl said...
Apr. 19, 2014 at 12:53 am
This is great, I love the emotion, keep writing
JacobTheOrdinary said...
Apr. 11, 2014 at 11:36 am
The poem is nice. I'd appreciate it if you used an ellipsis instead of just two periods. . . That's the only critizism I have. I'm expecting more now, so keep writing.
Nobuo This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 11, 2014 at 1:31 pm
What do you mean by ellipsis? Please tell me how I can change it
_Zavery_ said...
Apr. 9, 2014 at 6:05 pm
That first stanza got me hooked right away. I love that the title is simple, but the poem is very elaborate. Good imagery, great job!
EMOBVB said...
Apr. 7, 2014 at 1:23 pm
Great poem keep writing
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