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Nobody answers
She has hidden her scars
She let them simmer
and boil inside
She's drowning in her own tears
Gasping for the air
that nobody can give her
She screams
but nobody hears

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TheComet said...
Jun. 29, 2014 at 1:14 pm
I can surely relate to this feeling. It's simple but has all the words we need to say in such moment and feeling. I loved it, it's awesome !!! ^_^
Pargaran replied...
Jun. 29, 2014 at 1:16 pm
Thanks so much!
justmylife said...
May 1, 2014 at 7:53 pm
That's AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Pargaran replied...
Jun. 25, 2014 at 10:49 am
Thank you!! (:
Nella.Girl97 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 30, 2014 at 11:33 am
Great work! And I can understand this feeling! Love this!
Pargaran replied...
Apr. 30, 2014 at 11:44 am
Thank you! I'm glad you can relate, it's nice to have company in these feelings.
Sail_ said...
Apr. 30, 2014 at 11:32 am
Wow, this is really sad, and simple. I liked it a lot, though I wish it was a little longer, haha
Pargaran replied...
Apr. 30, 2014 at 11:43 am
Thank you :) What I usually write is longer, but this one just stuck as a kind of cursory poem.
book.junkie said...
Nov. 26, 2013 at 4:30 am
wow its short and u still get that feeling u can get to the point and still make it realistics while others must give 10 or so lines to make you feel sad (*cough cough*)  WELL DONE!
Pargaran replied...
Dec. 13, 2013 at 6:33 pm
Thank you very much for the comment! I often can't write short poems; I get all caught up in them. But this time it actually worked out, haha. (: And I know what you mean!
Pargaran said...
Nov. 24, 2013 at 2:51 pm
Thank you very much! I love to convey feelings. (:
booklover303 said...
Nov. 24, 2013 at 2:50 pm
Nice! It really makes you feel what the person in the poem is feeling!
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