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Crazy old woman

January 25, 2013
By awray0 GOLD, Seymour, Indiana
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awray0 GOLD, Seymour, Indiana
11 articles 6 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Be very careful if you make a woman cry, because God counts her tears. The woman came out of a man’s rib: Not from his feet to be walked on. Not from his head to be superior, but from the side to be equal. Under the arm to be protected, and next to the heart to be loved.”

live laught love

hope is love and forgivness

live life as if you die tomorrow

fake it till you make it

face up to the music an grab the bull by the horns

you never lose by loving you lose by holding back

its alright letting yourself go as long as you can get yourself back up

she never gave up on my mom is my hero

my mom had a great deal of trouble with me but i think she enjoyed it

i dont judge you for what you belief in so why judge mine.

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She looked in the mirror and thought real hard it seemed like yesterday she'd been crawlin around. For her hair was grey and skin was loose she looked like Mother Goose. Of course she was no goose even tho she did waddle. For she resembled an old maid and living on the bottle. Tho she had no children nor a husband she was happy with Lucky her trusty doggy companion. Her life seems short but not too fast. For that crazy old woman lived in the past. She lived through war. She lived hate. I have no idea how she lived through the pain. The crazy old woman is not too weak for she is strong like you and me.

© Angel V., Tecumseh, MI

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awray0 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 4:01 pm
awray0 GOLD, Seymour, Indiana
11 articles 6 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Be very careful if you make a woman cry, because God counts her tears. The woman came out of a man’s rib: Not from his feet to be walked on. Not from his head to be superior, but from the side to be equal. Under the arm to be protected, and next to the heart to be loved.”

live laught love

hope is love and forgivness

live life as if you die tomorrow

fake it till you make it

face up to the music an grab the bull by the horns

you never lose by loving you lose by holding back

its alright letting yourself go as long as you can get yourself back up

she never gave up on my mom is my hero

my mom had a great deal of trouble with me but i think she enjoyed it

i dont judge you for what you belief in so why judge mine.

View profile
Hey everyone if you like this one you should read Black and Blue it was just approved.. Please Rate, Comment, Suggest me to your friends. It would mean the world to me.
awray0 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 3:28 pm
awray0 GOLD, Seymour, Indiana
11 articles 6 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Be very careful if you make a woman cry, because God counts her tears. The woman came out of a man’s rib: Not from his feet to be walked on. Not from his head to be superior, but from the side to be equal. Under the arm to be protected, and next to the heart to be loved.”

live laught love

hope is love and forgivness

live life as if you die tomorrow

fake it till you make it

face up to the music an grab the bull by the horns

you never lose by loving you lose by holding back

its alright letting yourself go as long as you can get yourself back up

she never gave up on my mom is my hero

my mom had a great deal of trouble with me but i think she enjoyed it

i dont judge you for what you belief in so why judge mine.

View profile
Thank you and Im sure your a great writer.
Mr.packerbear12 SILVER said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 3:20 pm
Mr.packerbear12 SILVER, Minnesota Lake, Minnesota
5 articles 0 photos 105 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Judge lest not you be judged"

"Take the plank out of your own eye before the speck out of your brother's"

"live each day as if it's your last"

"God doesn't give you what you can handle, He helps you handle what you are given"

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very nice i like it i wsh i could write this well :)
awray0 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 1:40 pm
awray0 GOLD, Seymour, Indiana
11 articles 6 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Be very careful if you make a woman cry, because God counts her tears. The woman came out of a man’s rib: Not from his feet to be walked on. Not from his head to be superior, but from the side to be equal. Under the arm to be protected, and next to the heart to be loved.”

live laught love

hope is love and forgivness

live life as if you die tomorrow

fake it till you make it

face up to the music an grab the bull by the horns

you never lose by loving you lose by holding back

its alright letting yourself go as long as you can get yourself back up

she never gave up on my mom is my hero

my mom had a great deal of trouble with me but i think she enjoyed it

i dont judge you for what you belief in so why judge mine.

View profile
Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
AeneanSidera said...
on Jan. 28 2013 at 1:01 am
This is so cute ..