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Too Many

November 23, 2011
By PackerFan12 GOLD, Glendale, Wisconsin
PackerFan12 GOLD, Glendale, Wisconsin
14 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Winning isn't everything. It's the only thing" Vince Lombardi


Too many words of hurt and hate.
Too many things based on fate.
Too many painful addictions.
Too many restrictions.

Too many deaths and gangs.
Too many people using slang.
Too many soldiers die.
Too many anguishing cries.

Too many fights and wars.
Too many long lasting sores.
Too many people excluded.
Too many groups that are secluded.

Too many suns set before we are ready.
Leaving us in the dark,
Cold and lonely,
With a starless night.

But the sun always rises
and peace is regained.
Forever we sleep
in a starry sky,
listening to the music of the world.


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on Nov. 30 2011 at 12:45 pm
The_Real_ArielNever_Died PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
21 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To love me is a ticket to hate " - Myself

I Really Like This Poem!!!

It Really Speaks To People


on Nov. 30 2011 at 7:40 am
Simplemelody GOLD, Otisco, Indiana
17 articles 12 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
May the sun always shine on your windowpane; May a rainbow be certain to follow each rain; May the hand of a friend always be near you; May God fill your heart with gladness to cheer you.

This is very good. I loved the repetition and rhyme at the beginning  it made this piece what it is. Great Job