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determination

July 18, 2011
By chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.


suffering loss pain
and still with everything to gain
from the bottom
of the lowest
to the best
of the best
now no one
can contest
against her will
and determination
a quality that comes
with fustration
nevertheless can
we deny
a strong willed creature
just like you and i



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Snowi BRONZE said...
on Jan. 12 2012 at 6:13 pm
Snowi BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
I am me deal wit it.

uuuuuummmmm..... YES!! very true! i can't believe you are so deep? do you even know that your deep? what do you think about when you write? again amazing poetry

on Jul. 20 2011 at 10:28 am
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

s... its about this woman named cupcake brown... she has a book out its called "a piece of cake" its really good i suggest u read it ^-^

on Jul. 20 2011 at 9:29 am
creativewritingismything SILVER, Brookshire, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Creativity is a masterpiece in itself. The ability to manifest that masterpiece, and to recognize its worth, can be found in each of us, if only we would take the time to find our inspiration."
~Samantha Stewart (ME! :D)~

I felt something when i read this that i can't quite place... love it though, great work