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An Observation MAG

November 2, 2009
By JoeKLuv SILVER, Lake Mary, Florida
JoeKLuv SILVER, Lake Mary, Florida
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so he sips his tea
and thumbs his tie
but his thoughts
are not on tea
or tie or the
many women
fixing their hair
for the many men
to have something
to look at


they plan their days
according to their faults
and enjoy things like
a widow enjoys life
solemnity is non-existent
even in subtleties
they feel nothing

he is the one
who has not
yet sunk into
remission
don't worry,
they say
give it some time
let him sip his tea
and thumb his tie,
they say

eventually we will
drag him down
and give his soul
to the widow
who does not
fix her hair
for the many men
to have something
to look at



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on Nov. 21 2010 at 7:50 pm
SophaDee SILVER, Westport, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"We're all pretty bizarre. Some of us are just better at hiding it, that's all."- The Breakfast Club

I saw this in the May issue of Teen Ink--it was written right next to my article :) I love the way you used all lower case letters, and i like the repetition of sipping his tea and thumbing his tie. I really like your work! :)

JoeKLuv SILVER said...
on Nov. 7 2010 at 3:33 pm
JoeKLuv SILVER, Lake Mary, Florida
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I'm a cynic.

on Jan. 24 2010 at 12:01 pm
Just_Some_Guy BRONZE, Natick, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Reading is the thing we do to remind us of how much we'll never know.

How cynical.

on Jan. 24 2010 at 9:31 am
spitfire213 SILVER, North Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
In the devil's den i may be, so stab my heart and set me free.

i like it. very creative and descriptive.