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Make A Wish

January 13, 2014
By LovelyRee GOLD, Astumbo, Other
LovelyRee GOLD, Astumbo, Other
13 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Aut Viam Enveniam Aut Faciam
"Find A Way or Make One"


I look up at the stars making a wish
To find someone who was worth the risk
Someone who would promise to be by my side
Through thick, through thin, everyday and every night
Someone who would love me like they've never been hurt
Someone to listen and not say a word
Someone where I can hold and love forever
To have his heart through the worst and the better
Someone to call mine and me theirs
A kind of love that rarely exist
I close my eyes and make the wish


The author's comments:
A poem about the CLICHE love story about finding 'THE ONE.' Everyone is looking for that special soul just like me right?

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LovelyRee GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2014 at 7:55 pm
LovelyRee GOLD, Astumbo, Other
13 articles 1 photo 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Aut Viam Enveniam Aut Faciam
"Find A Way or Make One"

Thank you :)

PixiePoet GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2014 at 4:06 pm
PixiePoet GOLD, Woodbine, Maryland
11 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We must not lose this sense of possibility because in the end, it's all we have." - Marina Keegan

Oh my gosh, this is so sweet!  It definately made me smile :D  THe only thing I could say against it is that sometimes the rhyming was a bit choppy.  Overall, though, 5 stars.