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Very relatable. After a bad break up of mine, I literally cut nearly all my hair off. Chilling word choice, you have a lot of talent

People now a days don't take relationships serious. They end up hurting people because a relationship isn't important to them. It’s sickening to see people being used. When he says, “And even less heart left to break.” His heart was broken before and doesn't get better as he goes.

Really cool~ Short and direct with so much meaning. 

so short, but perfectly descriptive. cuts right to the core. amazing.

Wow, this is so chilling. It's one of the best short poems I've ever read. My favorite line is, "But now I've no hair left for cutting."

Wow! Short but extremely true and vey deep! I love it:)

this is very true!! I really like it :-)

its so true its like sayin gthe more sins u make the less forgives u get or somthing i love this poem its so true

Chills!!! Extremely good writing..keep it up <3!

 

This is really good(:

If you have time could you check some of my poems out and comment.?

Beautiful.

I love how you can express that type of feeling in 4 stanza's . Two thumbs up!

this is sooo great omg!!! But i dont get it.. kind of.

i think it's great. sweet,short,straight to the point. bravo!!!

this is good id like to see a longer piece of yours you have potiential . maybe a little more emotion would make it alot better

I love this poem, it shows real emotion. =)

Short and sweet!