In The End

February 14, 2010
By jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."


Please don't come my way,
do not look at me and smile.
Pretend you can't see my pain
and just walk away for a while.

I’ll bow my head in defeat,
if you promise to pass me by.
I’ll silence my heart forever,
if you'll look away as I cry.

Just turn your head the other way
and notice anyone but me.
Don’t attempt to make things better,
because there’s no way to set me free.

I don’t want you to look at me anymore,
I don’t want your sorrowful glance.
Please don’t ask for forgiveness;
you’ve blown another chance.

So let it rest, let it be done
watch it sink into our past.
I’m done with you; you’re done with me,
in the end, our memories will last.


The author's comments:
When there is no real sympathy or sorrow in an apology, after a while you don't want anyone to feel sorry for you anymore. When you are hurt, sometimes the thing to do is to forget. 'In The End' if the memories were meant to last, they will.

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on Jul. 19 2012 at 10:17 am
Winter-Razorblade BRONZE, Halifax, Other
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Absolutely beautiful... I'm speechless. 

on Dec. 28 2011 at 6:40 pm
PrincessSparkleStar BRONZE, Michigan
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I really liked this poem!! I didn't think it would be about someone who broke up, though. It might have more meaning if you change the ending and use this ending for another poem. Please look at my work and criticize it!

ItzStar BRONZE said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 6:51 pm
ItzStar BRONZE, Waianae, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"Imma Overcome, not be breaking down instead"
-Shirnel Enos

OOps sorry big mistake...But AWESOME poem I LOOOOVE it (:

ItzStar BRONZE said...
on Nov. 14 2011 at 6:50 pm
ItzStar BRONZE, Waianae, Hawaii
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imma Overcome, not be breaking down instead"
-Shirnel Enos

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

on Aug. 18 2011 at 8:50 pm
HateKnuckle SILVER, Peru, New York
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I liked it but only because I perceived it as you not wanting to be felt sorry for because of your desire to experience your sadness. Obviously I was wrong. 4 stars.

on Sep. 10 2010 at 7:56 am
pnkninja11 BRONZE, Partlow, Virginia
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I liked it when you said, "Please don’t ask for forgiveness;
you’ve blown another chance."
It reminds me of someone who I once cared for that didn't really care about me.

on Sep. 3 2010 at 8:47 pm
Bookwormwriter SILVER, Centerville, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 16 comments
your rhythm and rhyming is impeccable!  i love it!  your writing is all about feelings when someone does something to you.  i love iT!!!  if you can, please check out my work, comment, and rate!  thanks!  also, the same message to any and all who see this comment!

on Aug. 29 2010 at 9:05 pm
surviver101 GOLD, Houston, Texas
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I LOVE IT!!! It makes me want to cry but in a good way I love it!!!!

on Aug. 20 2010 at 12:28 pm
aliveonink GOLD, Rochester, Minnesota
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i love your writting!great job!

on Aug. 14 2010 at 8:53 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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It's funny how emotions are evoked when you read something you can relate to. This is truly a wonderful piece.

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:03 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
30 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

You have a great rhythm to your poetry! I loved it. I totally understand this characters feelings. Great job! Check out my work sometime if you ever get the chance!

on Jun. 28 2010 at 1:49 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
54 articles 0 photos 2066 comments

Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

you should be a philosopher, a psychologist, or something else like that. you've got the stuff. captainize me captain. 5 stars.

on May. 31 2010 at 6:18 am
taintedannex GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
15 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
The truth is that at some point, everyone's going to hurt you. You just have to decide who's worth the pain.

Some say having something to lose is what makes you vulnerable. I believe that having something to lose only makes you stronger.

This is such a great poem. It's sad, but beautifully written. 
I can relate. The emotions? Completely spot on.

<3 :)


on May. 28 2010 at 8:57 pm
Guitarkid BRONZE, Waupaca, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
We come to love not by finding a perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly

Great! I love it. You have some pretty great work. Keep it up.

on May. 22 2010 at 4:04 pm
VampiericRain GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
Would you like a side of epic with that fail?

This is why I love your work. Your so amazing at putting feelings into words. Five stars! :)

on May. 21 2010 at 7:20 pm
alexandraacreel GOLD, Lorton, Virginia
15 articles 8 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The soul would have no rainbow had the eyes no tears."

I reallyy enjoyed your passion in your writing, and i love how you can portray someone's exact feelings through these words ! great job !

Ellen2x2 GOLD said...
on May. 18 2010 at 7:41 pm
Ellen2x2 GOLD, North Scituate, Rhode Island
11 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not random, you just can't think as fast as me.

omg!!! amazing! I love that you rhymed, i absolutly hate it when people don't.

on May. 15 2010 at 9:29 am
celloizmylife PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
27 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Around here, however, we don't look backwards for very long.
We keep moving forward, opening up new doors and doing new things, because we're curious.....And curiosity keeps leading us down new paths.
-Walt Disney

It was beautiful! I most certainly did not deserve that comment from you, or even the chance for my writing to be read by you when your own is as magnificent as that of a professional! I love it!

on May. 13 2010 at 7:28 am
.Escape.From.This.Afterlife. GOLD, Short Hills, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 94 comments

Favorite Quote:
"bad blood is more satisfying to spill across the floor..."

Very emotional and powerful, I really enjoyed it. :)

RinnyG. SILVER said...
on May. 12 2010 at 6:24 pm
RinnyG. SILVER, Manhattan, Kansas
5 articles 3 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm tall enough I can touch the ground!

Once your born, you start to die...

So, I can definately compare with this one.  If only people really acted like this.  Sometimes it's just better when people leave you alone.


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