Mind Reader

June 1, 2009
By HLS21 GOLD, Scenery Hill, Pennsylvania
HLS21 GOLD, Scenery Hill, Pennsylvania
12 articles 2 photos 1 comment

I wish I could read your mind.
To see what you have behind,
To see all the secrets you hide,
To see how you really feel inside.



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on Feb. 6 2013 at 10:46 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I didn't really connect with this Poem. I felt like each line was saying the same thing, and since its really short that makes it redundant. Just my opinion.

on Aug. 1 2010 at 4:53 pm
nickykens ELITE, Draper, Utah
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Short, sweet and to the point.  Could be better, but is by no means bad.

Milo! said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 8:01 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.




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