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The War

January 17, 2015
By SCSKATE SILVER, Austin, Texas
SCSKATE SILVER, Austin, Texas
9 articles 5 photos 23 comments

The enemies surrounding us before
Buried in memories, ashes scattered in pain
Forsaken in the dust once more

 

The bitter words an avalanche slamming the door
The whispers of silence are slain
The enemies surrounding us before

 

A bloody ocean dying the shore
The ashes stain
Forsaken in the dust once more

 

The atmosphere so dark so poor
They come by train
The enemies surrounding us before

 

The ones we knew lie dead on the floor
We’ve won but what did we gain
Forsaken in the dust once more

 

It seems the enemies have surrendered the war
They have surrendered their reign
The enemies surrounding us before
Forsaken in the dust once more


The author's comments:

This piece is a villanelle. It has a specific line repetition pattern.


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on Mar. 9 2015 at 7:41 pm
jking445 BRONZE, Middleburh Heights, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Just let yourself be free because even broken wings can fly away.

Sanctuary ~ Paradise Fears

this is really good! i like it!

SCSKATE SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2015 at 5:31 pm
SCSKATE SILVER, Austin, Texas
9 articles 5 photos 23 comments
thank you. I also checked out some of your work. Love the photos!

Ana143 GOLD said...
on Feb. 23 2015 at 7:58 pm
Ana143 GOLD, Bolivar, Ohio
17 articles 4 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your always beautiful in my eyes"
"Be who you are not what someone else wants you to be"

really good work!