CuTe

May 7, 2009
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


In all the chaotic confussion that surounds my spinning mind,
Ear splitting silence.
Can't think.
Can't move.
Can't take it anymore.
It's more of just a blue stage
Sometimes it's more than just a bit of pain
Sometimes it's more than a heart break
mind-
soul break.
Shattered reflections in pools or crimson
from lush bubbles that form with
a precise sick beauty,
you can't get enough.
It's numbing.
It's hard candy.
A whisper to a scream.
All in still silence
This is cute
without the E.


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on Apr. 20 2016 at 6:45 pm
itsrainingcats GOLD, East Hampton, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"Those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind." -Dr. Suess

It just shows how important a title is. Great poem though btw.

on Jan. 27 2012 at 2:53 pm
MarleyRainbow PLATINUM, Valles MInes, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
one good thing about music is, when it hits you, you feel no pain.

cute without the E is my fav line, it is just so amazing the way you capture everything in one little poem.

on Jan. 2 2012 at 3:41 am
Missundrstoodx2, Indianapolis, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"You never know what it enough until you know what is more than enough."

i had to re-read this once you revealed the catch in the last two lines which is such a powerful way to write...great articulations of the struggle...hopefully words will become your most powerful way to cope in the future.

on Nov. 22 2011 at 9:33 am
swiftheart GOLD, Houston, Texas
17 articles 5 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone were to pay you 10 cents for every kind word you ever spoke and collect 5 cents for every unkind word, would you be rich or poor?"

I agree, the poem is powerful however, the title brings down its value.

on Oct. 31 2011 at 4:52 pm
SqueakyLove BRONZE, Baton Rouge, Louisiana
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dreams are hopeless aspirations in hopes of coming true. Believe in yourself. The rest is up to me and you" -Lisa "Left Eye" Lopes

When I saw yhe title i didnt think much of the poem but now i read it i can feel n how powerful it is! GREAT WORK!!

on Aug. 4 2011 at 5:47 pm
RhythmAndRhyme BRONZE, Rockford, Michigan
4 articles 0 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There's no half-singing in the shower, you're either a rock star or an opera diva." ~~Josh Groban

This was so pwerful! I've now read all of your poems. They're all so moving, so filled with a certain feeling, a certain passion...very cool to read! Keep on truckin'!

spency SILVER said...
on May. 30 2011 at 7:43 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

you right this is cute without the e word......good job....keep it up...rated u 5/5....

on Mar. 25 2011 at 1:31 am
PerfectMGymnast DIAMOND, Parker, Colorado
57 articles 25 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't leap you'lll never know what it's like to fly"

i loved this!! especially the end this is cute without an e!! :)

Hotaru said...
on Mar. 22 2011 at 7:11 pm
I just finished reading your poems and they both seem to represent so much feeling.  It always amazes me when I find a writier who can write a poem like you. The emotion and imagery is like a rude awakening compared to a lot of the bad writing on this website.  (That would be me) :) I really wish you would write more! I added your peoms to my collection of great peoms I've read. Don't worry, I won't claim it as my own. (Not that anyone would believe I had wrote it!) Anyways, I am begging you to write more because I would love to read what you have and I would definitely give you my honest opinion on what you write. I know how hard it is to find a person who will honestly comment on what you write. (Well, at least that has always been my case.) Thanks! Again, please write more!!!

AmbRawr BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 12:18 am
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks

lol where next to allentown?

When I'm older I hope to write more books, I self published my first with this poem in it as part of the story... I hope to maybe be published by a company or something =[ ...wishful thinking though it seems


AmbRawr BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 12:16 am
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks

Thank you =]

I have been an avid journal-er? lol since I was 12.

I have never thought to add music; I honestly don't think I could. I'd be clueless


AmbRawr BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 12:14 am
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks

My spelling is terrible =]

I caught another mistake as well and it bugs me every time I look here lol


searbear180 said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 9:04 pm
you r an amazing writer! i love ur wording. it makes u feel like ur there.

on Feb. 9 2011 at 8:02 pm
starxoxo23 PLATINUM, New Hampshire, New Hampshire
21 articles 0 photos 97 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The creative is the place where no one else has ever been. You have to leave the city of your comfort and go into the wilderness of your intuition. What you'll discover will be wonderful. What you'll discover is yourself."
- Alan Alda

This is amazing. You have some serious talent and I can totally relate to the feelings you're describing.

on Jan. 13 2011 at 11:18 am
ImAnAlien SILVER, Grand Junction, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
so stick that in your juice box and suck it

love it. ive felt that way so i know what thats like

on Oct. 6 2010 at 7:10 am
amlee1212 BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'll love you forever or find something better..."

This poem has a lot of detail and perfect imagery. It really grabs onto you until the very last line. There is one thing that I noticed, 'confussion' is spelled confusion. You are a very great writer, this poem really speaks to me. Keep sharing your talent with the world.

on Sep. 30 2010 at 10:16 pm
JimmyGee BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
You either do it and overdo it or you don't do it at all..

you're an amazing writer..like honestly how long have you been writting?Have you ever considered adding some music?

Dren12 said...
on Apr. 29 2010 at 4:27 pm
Dren12, Brevard, North Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't love me at my worst, then you don't deserve me at my best"

I absolutely love this poem....:)  you have serious talent

Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:05 pm
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
17 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

this poem is beyond amazing. the way you can isolate an emotion, especially this one, and portray it perfectly into words. i kno exactly wat u mean when it comes to this. you really need to post more work. i cant get enough!

on Apr. 11 2010 at 3:54 pm
celloizmylife PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
27 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Around here, however, we don't look backwards for very long.
We keep moving forward, opening up new doors and doing new things, because we're curious.....And curiosity keeps leading us down new paths.
-Walt Disney

This is really good, but I creepily sense you're referring to cutting yourself... pleaz don't go there. It's the dark path of the low road.


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