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Shall I Forever Be Broken?

July 9, 2010
By Sabrina.Nichole SILVER, Pineville, Kentucky
Sabrina.Nichole SILVER, Pineville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Live your life as you wish, its like possessing a coin, you may spend it however you please; but you can only spend it once, so spend it wisely" - Thomas Kinworth


The seasons fade, but they never change. The sun hides behind the clouds so full of wrath. The bitter rain drops hide away my tears from the world.


To have found love and to have lost it is tragic; but to love and not be loved in return kills the soul. I am left with no desire and no will to go on, drowning in an ocean of sorrow, you my darling, gave me life, and now that life has passed on.

For I am now as a rose, once so gay and full of life, that has weathered away. The symbolic rose will bloom again, but what shall become of me? Shall I forever be broken?


The author's comments:
There is no remedy for heartbreak. Its like the flu, we can take medicine to soothe it, but it will not go away until it has ran its course.

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on Jun. 20 2011 at 10:28 pm
Sabrina.Nichole SILVER, Pineville, Kentucky
8 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live your life as you wish, its like possessing a coin, you may spend it however you please; but you can only spend it once, so spend it wisely" - Thomas Kinworth

Thank you:)

on Aug. 7 2010 at 12:44 pm
Thesilentraven PLATINUM, Mableton, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"il piu nell' uno," (according to Emerson, an Italian expression for beauty)

"Unable are the loved to die, for love is immortality" ~Emily Dickinson

"The deeper that sorrow carves into your being, the more joy you can contain"
~Kahlil Gibran

Great poem. I like the first bit the best.

Ah, love. How can you be so great and yet cause so much hurt?


on Jul. 27 2010 at 6:23 pm
Sabrina.Nichole SILVER, Pineville, Kentucky
8 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Live your life as you wish, its like possessing a coin, you may spend it however you please; but you can only spend it once, so spend it wisely" - Thomas Kinworth

Thank you very much

on Jul. 13 2010 at 5:17 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

i love this poem its amazing