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Taylor J.
Summary: Vivian has to put up with her up coming wedding, school, friends, enemies and death

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Freckles3 said...
Nov. 15, 2012 at 6:17 pm
Really good plot... But am I just imagining it... Or is the third chapter the same as the fourth? Am I going crazy?
Tbuggy replied...
Mar. 7, 2013 at 1:38 pm
this is a really late reply and im sorry but my orignal account got lost but yes the third and fourth got copied somehow
Freckles3 replied...
Mar. 7, 2013 at 8:39 pm
Haha, it's okay. I thought I had gone back in time or something! ;) Anyway, this is really great! I love the characters! Keep it up!
Surobhi_Moitrayee said...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 5:20 am
wow! nice...i'd be glad if you'd check my book too :)
readaholic This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 11, 2012 at 10:24 am
It's good, but the lack of punctuaion honestly gets a little distracting and makes the story hard to follow. Same goes for the grammar issues, I mean, this story feels like it was written almost in text-speak! The story somehow just feels...incomplete, like too much is happening without a breath or explaination. On the plus side, love the ideas and action! Makes me want more! KEEP WRITING! :)
Silver2black said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 12:19 pm
Cool like Hidden said, Extreme Awesomeness, I loved your beautiful, I have lots of favorite parts, I like the way things are described 'A sun Gasping' Cleverly written, Honestly 5/5 !
Silver2black replied...
Feb. 3, 2012 at 4:47 am
Came back to reread, it is missing some things such as question marks in the questions, along with some tiny minor mistakes, But I got the decently written story, way to go, i like your style !
HiddenAngelInTheDark said...
Feb. 1, 2012 at 5:04 pm
Awesomeness ^_^
raeee replied...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 5:48 pm
I absolutely LOVED it. All of it. True, there are some puncuation errors and such, but fantastic nonetheless .

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