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CocobeanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Jan. 14 at 6:03 pm

I'll comment the first few sentences. Then you add a few (around 1 to 5 sentences, preferably) and wait for the next person until a story weaves itself together. :)

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CocobeanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 14 at 6:08 pm

     His body trembles next to mine as I stroke his hair, interlacing my fingers into the soft honey curls.
     "Do you really love me?" his strained voice chokes out into the air.
     The sight of him, with his usually warm brown eyes small and weary from crying, the dried tear-streams that trace over his cheekbones, the bruise that lines his jaw, tugs at my heart. "Of course I do, love," I say without a moment of hesitation.
     How could they do this to him?

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JstAnotherWriter replied...
Jan. 15 at 6:54 pm

His face scrunches and curdles into a sour or bitter expression, reminding her of dried peaches and apricots. "No you don't," he says. "You can't love a monster, and that's what I am now. A monster."

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Attica replied...
Jan. 19 at 9:19 am

I watch as the tears well up in his eyes, helplessness spilling over. I never thought that I would see him like this. He had been so strong, so...unbreakable. But, I had been wrong, he had been broken. Now it was my job to put him back together. 

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makeupartist16 replied...
Apr. 14 at 2:25 pm

  "No,no. You can't let them get to you. You are not a monster." But no amount of my assurances fases him. He abruptly turns ready to leave, so I grab for him, trying to salvage what little of him is left."I love you, and no one or anything could ever change that."

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Apr. 14 at 2:34 pm

"Then where were you when they were doing this to me?" he asks, and the worst part is that his voice isn't angry. It's just... tired. 
I flinch at the sound of it, scrambling for something to say. "I-"
 

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Attica replied...
Apr. 14 at 5:28 pm

He cuts me off without words. All I need is a glance at his face. He's been defeated by war. Life had dealt him a harsh hand, a hand which had beaten him down again and again till he was nothing but a shell of a man...nothing but a shell. 

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SonsbearThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 25 at 5:42 pm

And just by a glance, I could tell, I could see that there was nothing I could do. Everything had been sucked out of him like a leech drawing blood. And so I sat there silently, knowing that every word of reassurance that spewed out of my mouth was unheard. Maybe I can't do anything, but they could. After all, they were the cause, so why couldn't they be the solution?

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Attica replied...
May 26 at 8:46 am

The war had dest.royed all of us, some more than others. But it had ob.li.terated him. He was right-he was a monster.

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asb22 replied...
Jun. 25 at 3:13 pm

I turned away from him, hiding my tears as they fell bitterly into my hair. I heard the sounds of his worn shoes scuffing across the linolium as he vacated the small room--their sanctuary in this foul, dirty world. He left me, alone in the gloom. Alone and wondering how love could make me feel so empty.

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SpeakerofWolvesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 21 at 11:32 am

My sobs echoed the room, amd my freshly painted nails clawing my arms, leaving a small trail of blood. He and I was so close, but now war has broken our love. Why, why  wasn't I there? Why did I give her spoiled lies. If I've been there, then maybe I could save him.

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SonsbearThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 16 at 8:39 pm

But I wasn't there.
So he shattered.
And I knew that I couldn't put him back together.

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