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anonymous06This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 19, 2016 at 3:51 pm

"Mum?!" "Yes, dear, I knew you moved out and on with your life, but that doesn't mean I can't still call you." I laughed, straight up laughed, into the receiver of the phone. "Thank god it's you."

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anonymous06This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 19, 2016 at 3:52 pm

((Those were supposed to be separate lines for each dialogue))

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JstAnotherWriter replied...
Oct. 21, 2016 at 12:07 am

"Yes well," she continued, ignoring my peculiar attitude. "You won't believe what Hannah has just told me. It's absolutely horrible. I just can't believe..." "Hannah told you? Hannah knows?" I asked in hysterics. Hannah is Angies mum. She went on, "She told me that Brad has gone off with another women and left Angie for good. Just called her an hour ago and spilled the beans. Came clean. Talk about shock therapy." "Wait!" I almost yelled. Practically thinking out loud now, "Angie knows about Brad and barbie?" "and she's apsolutely heartbroken, poor thing. I can't imagine how she's getting on. She doesn't deserve this you know. Not even after she stole him away from you" "Mum she didn't steel him away"
She went on but I was only half listening at this point, "and to think that they'de been so happy together. I should have known something was wrong. The way he wasn't acting himself at that party when I'd thought you two were back together. He just seemed so sure of himself. A little too sure I surmise." I could imagine how I must have looked at this moment. Eyes bulging, mouth hung open like a sick, German Shepherd. How did I let this happen? She must be drowning in tears by now, poor thing. "Mum I'll talk to you later. There's someone who needs me." I hung up the phone and dialled my best friends number.

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JstAnotherWriter replied...
Oct. 21, 2016 at 12:08 am

(Sorry if the dialogue is confusing. It was meant to be on seperate lines.)

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JstAnotherWriter replied...
Nov. 16, 2016 at 3:53 am

((If anyone wants to continue this please do, was a great story))

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kskpillaiThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 2 at 9:04 am

The phone was ringing. Yet there was an ominous, portentous air about the droning sound.
"Hello?"
"Jess!*sob*Hey..I guess all of this is coincidental... I was thinking of you...but, obviously you wouldn't know..."
"Hey. I saw it happen."
"What are you talking about?"
"Brad cheating on you. That's why I called you."
"Aaaaargh! No....Brad, please spare me, spare me, nooooooo!
There was a silence so profound, I could almost hear it screaming.
I dreaded the voice that I soon, no doubt would hear. 
It did not come.

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JstAnotherWriter replied...
Jan. 13 at 8:00 pm

Was I delusional or was Brad really there at Angies house? What could be happening? Oh god no, why had he been acting so strange all this time? I forced myself to stop thinking and start acting. I grabbed my keys off the coffee table and the next thing I knew I was speeding down Leonard Avenue, on the way to saving my best friend.

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kskpillaiThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 29 at 3:26 am

The door was off its hinges. Blood everywhere. I walked in, shaking, from head to toe. It was dark, and dangerously silent. The lights suddenly came on. 
There was Brad wearing his most ROMANTIC expression.
He was down on one knee.
"Will you marry me".

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J-natlove replied...
May 7 at 6:46 am

My brain was exploding.                          What did he just say!?                                This has to be a dream, this can't be true...
 

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J-natlove replied...
May 7 at 6:49 am

sorry for the weird structure I am new here.
 

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jules_eseeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sep. 24 at 6:53 pm

"Brad, what did you do? Where is Angie." My voice shook as I spoke slowly. I began to walk backwards, cautiously making sure not to be too sudden. 
Brad smiles and stands up quickly. "I did it all for you... you.. you." With each word he takes another step forward, reaching out for me. 

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3e11A replied...
Nov. 2 at 9:40 am

Everyone was had someone to go with except for me.

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