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bo_olsenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Oct. 16 at 5:29 pm

I really want feedback on my story: All Apologies. I want good, honest feedback, please, and if you request feedback on one of your articles/stories/novels/poems, I'll give you feedback. Thanks in advance!
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StarMRThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 17 at 12:32 am

Help me Help you. (Sorry for the Logang reference)
 

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StarMRThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 17 at 12:33 am

Anyway, I really like it. Your a great writer. It seems detailed enough. Try to add similes and metaphors when you think it's best, but I loved it. :)

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bo_olsenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 17 at 11:16 am

Thanks for the feedback! Would you like feedback on anything?

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