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I Want Read Your Work

RobotPenn. posted this thread...
Jul. 3, 2017 at 2:54 am

Yo, I want to read y'all's stories. I'll give feedback if you want it. It will be honest, and specific. I want to get some editing practice in, but mostly I want to read some great stuff and discuss it with you. Leave me your stories, and let's get started 

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Jul. 3, 2017 at 6:19 am

Anything under my name is fine, but Divided is by far my most serious work. I know of some grammar errors already, but if you'd like to take a look, I'd appreciate it.

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readitb4 replied...
Jul. 3, 2017 at 8:22 pm

Any of my work would be really cool to have reviewed, you can pick, but I already have some feedback on Drops Of Fate, so you don't really have to read that one.

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Jtatsu replied...
Jul. 5, 2017 at 11:20 pm

Please read The Ideas Desk. I'd really like more feedback on it. 

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SeekJusticeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 13, 2017 at 3:28 am

I'd love it if you could have a look at my work The Promise. Even a short critique would be really helpful!

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Jul. 19, 2017 at 2:02 pm

Anything you are willing to respond to is great.

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8thNoteFlutist replied...
Jul. 31, 2017 at 1:38 pm

Could you check out Dragons? I'd really like to get some feedback on it. Thanks.

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T.A.Price replied...
Sept. 4, 2017 at 6:53 pm

Hello :) I would appreciate more reads on my article "Fear". (Link: TeenInk.com/fiction/sci_fi_fantasy/article/962585/Fear/ )
It is a fantasy piece that touches on the complexity of fighting both metaphorical and real monsters as well as the consequences of facing your fears.
The story is about a person doing just that- facing a physical manifestation of her fears which is, in short, a monster.

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WolfWhisperer0911This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 10, 2017 at 3:43 pm

Anything you want! :) But I would to ask for "The Wolfians" since I want to improve it so more, but not sure how. TeenInk.com/fiction/fan_fiction/article/941863/The-Wolfians/
 

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KittyKoala replied...
Sept. 15, 2017 at 2:38 pm

If you get a chance I would really appreciate it if you could check out my story, Pure Hearted. Thank you so much :)

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jules_eseeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 24, 2017 at 6:18 pm

Hi my name is Julia. Here is the link to the first chapter of my latest project. If you have time to read it, I would really appreciate any feedback. 
Thanks :)

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HidingAnnabellaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 11, 2017 at 4:13 pm

There she was again. With her arms spread like she was a bird trying to catch a wind. Her long silver hair, that shone like the moon was flying around her thin body. She wasn't wearing anything but that wasn't what drew me to her. What caught my attention of this beautiful girl was her eyes. Her eyes where the color of ice. They were the most amazing thing I had ever seen. I was so caught up in those icy blue eyes I almost didn't see the way that the waves below the cliff, that we were standing on, stopped. When I could finally tear my eyes away from the girl, I noticed I had no idea where I was. I was standing about five feet from the girl. With her back to the bright night sky and the choppy waters below but why weren't there any noises. Then all of a sudden she leaned back. I ran to grab her, to pull her into the safety of my arms. But the blue eye girl was gone. In her place a small silver bird flew of into the gray sky.

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ec.li.ps.eThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 14, 2017 at 9:27 pm

Well, I really like Priorites, despite it being kind of old!

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jules_eseeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 16, 2017 at 1:18 pm

I guess the link didn't attach. But the project is titled: "The Girl Who Went Missing for Just Twelve Days" 

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Evangeline74This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 19, 2017 at 10:40 am

You can read any of my stories and give me feedback both in editing and telling me what you think of them

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SlyyWolf replied...
Oct. 20, 2017 at 12:59 pm

I've submitted a book I am currently working on and have been working on since, 6th grade. It's called Trinity Soul Spiral and I would love for anywone to look and review it please, I love feedback and want to find ways to fix my writing

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IsaiahV17This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 10, 2017 at 11:56 am

Check out my story, "The Devil's Eyes". I would love feedback!

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PalindromeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 14, 2017 at 6:46 pm

Could you take a look at my script here: TeenInk.com/fiction/scripts_plays/article/970256/Star-Wars/

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wetumbrella5This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 18, 2017 at 11:15 am

you can criticize my work if u like

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ahmontgomery replied...
Nov. 30, 2017 at 2:31 pm

I have 3 short stories and two poems. Would you check some of them out?

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