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WhiteNoiseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. posted this thread...
Oct. 3 at 10:41 am

Will you please look at my poetry and tell me what i could improve? I need opinions, as I'm being published soon. Thanks!

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FluffyPanda427This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 15 at 10:34 pm

All your poems are fantastic you dont need improvement....you just need to write more poems so i could read them and be jealous that you can write poetry so well and i can't. lol :D thx friend

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WhiteNoiseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 17 at 12:38 am

aww thanks. It just flows. i will be surprised if you haven't read them all already. I post a lot, but sometimes they get too real or are too brutal for teenink to handle. Only a handful of my poems get posted. on averaged i try to post about 4 or 5 poems a week.

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FluffyPanda427This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 17 at 6:18 pm

Well you are a very good writer with lots of skill. I like poetery I....just am really bad at writing it. I suck lol its the truth 

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WhiteNoiseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 18 at 8:21 am

You say you suck at writing
Yet you should keep trying
Just let it flow
Let your light show
Let other people see
The beautiful writer I know you can be

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FluffyPanda427This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 18 at 9:57 am

How!? That was an amazing poem XD 

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WhiteNoiseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 18 at 10:12 am

How is it amazing?
Listening to the crazy?
Im insane
Maybe I will be someone someday
It comes natural
So factual
Off the top
Never gonna stop
Just a quick little rhyme
To show my thanks. youre too kind!
Just something quick
Even though I'm sick
To brighten your day
Lets hope it stays that way

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WhiteNoiseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 18 at 10:42 am

Lol that was just a quick rhyme. A friend of mine wanted me to make a rap, and needless to say, she was not disappointed lol. It's too explicit for teenink tho lol, otherwise i wouldve posted it

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FluffyPanda427This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 18 at 5:05 pm

Everything comes easily to you! 

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WhiteNoiseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 18 at 11:28 pm

yeah. It does lol. 

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FluffyPanda427This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 19 at 7:06 pm

Luky person lol XD

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WhiteNoiseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 20 at 8:14 am

I would trade this talent of mine and everything else I had to change one decision I made at a very young age. I would go back to '06 (I was 6 years old) and pick the left path instead of the right. I would'nt be the same person if I could do that.

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StephanyMoore3401 replied...
Oct. 24 at 11:16 pm

We all make mistakes, we all wish we could go back in time and at least just change one thing. But thats how life is, it wont let you go back in time sadly. However, your work is great. Keep writing.! It's your talent.

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WhiteNoiseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 25 at 8:10 am

Thank you. I don't intend to stop writing. Always will. Its in my veins.

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