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addictwithapenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 5 at 2:40 pm

@bo_olsen I have commented my feedback on your piece.

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addictwithapenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 5 at 2:47 pm

@igobyamy I have commented my feedback on your poem.

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addictwithapenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 5 at 3:00 pm

@ThatQuietTeapot
In the first stanza, replacing “that” with “as” would improve flow. You could also clarify who you mean by “them” in the second-to-last line. I like the repetition in the first and last line: it really helps to convey a cycle of time slipping away. Good work.

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Liv.HarrisThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 26 at 4:39 pm

I, Liv.Harris, understand that the feedback I will receive is just one person's opinion, and I will take it with a grain of salt.
TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/876771/Deprogramming/

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maddielouwho88This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sep. 18 at 6:12 pm

I, maddielouwho88, understand that the feedback I will receive is just one person's opinion, and I will take it with a grain of salt. 
 
TeenInk.com/poetry/all/article/963374/Flesh/ 

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JujuforeverThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sep. 20 at 7:47 pm

I, jujuforever, understand that the feedback I will receive is just one person's opinion, and I will take it with a grain of salt
I would like to have all my material critiqued, if possible, you can find it by clicking my username.

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skywenk replied...
Oct. 11 at 5:30 pm

I'd love it if you could critique my work :)

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aremmons1 replied...
Oct. 13 at 2:27 pm

totes cute

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StephanyMoore3401 replied...
Oct. 28 at 6:32 pm

"I, StephanyMoore3401, understand that the feedback I will receive is just one person's opinion, and I will take it with a grain of salt.

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