I read your work
Amazing
I loved it
I experienced what you showed to me
And I could relate
I wished to express my gratitude
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I begin to say
How much this meant to me
But stop
I can't find the perfect words
To fit this perfect feeling
Reluctantly
I ...
Life
To the lifeless
Not
The obvious
Not
The eyes
Motionless
But,
Less poetically,
The un-
Personifiable
Not ugly
Just not grand
Sweeping
Sweet
Powerful
No
The rock
That doesn't look
Like anything...
Heart Strings
As if
The heart is just an instrument
To be played
Music is
Emotion
A (foot) note
Once plucked
It fades into the air
My heart strings
Were plucked by you
Only the echo lingers...
Is pronunciation key?
What to say?
and what to leave on the page?
How could a listener appreciate fully
If a comma was left out?
Could he be a man
Who hated verbalization so?
Or loved it enough
to make it a challenge...
Add (so much)
You knew that you didn't need them
Poetry famous in it's own right
(But...)
You chose
To enhance
For my sake
You let us in
The secret walls of your mind
(These defensive walls)...