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In the writing titled "Things You Don't Know You Want" written by Prescilla R., I felt in awe.  Her writing about going from hating someone to falling in love with them left me feeling happy.  At the beginning, I expected the author to write about everything she hates about this boy.  I enjoy the part where she tells how they started talking about themselves, learning about each other.  I suspect that they are in love when the author writes, "'This is it," he says. "You and me,"". The boy basiclly states that he wants to be with the girl for the rest of his life.  The girl realizes that she is in love when she thinks, "And suddenly, he was the prettiest thing I've ever seen."  She thinks this after thinking that he is so disgustingand terrible looking.  It is such a great feeling to know that there are still great love stories in the world today.




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