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Intro sonnet

August 11, 2014
By apostasy BRONZE, Naklo, Other
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Will I compose a splendid work of art
a painting fair and bright as angels skin
or should I soon need brief change of my heart
I'll take you on my ride for grotesque spin

I did not truly mean a painting bright
and doubt there's any chance my heart will change
for long is since last time I've seen the light
a pleasant thought would likely seem quite strange

Still i posses my paint and crooked lines
my ride still travels on it's saddened trail
though it seems every single of the signs
show burning boat that sails out of the dale

I favour not to do the painting yet
for it has always been to me a threat

© lily H., Kekaha, HI

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apostasy BRONZE said...
on Aug. 23 2014 at 6:55 am
apostasy BRONZE, Naklo, Other
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Thank you very much for your feedback :) It sure is a motivation to continue writing . Cheers!
Princess.Renda GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2014 at 6:05 pm
Princess.Renda GOLD, Travelers Rest, South Carolina
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"All the world is made of faith, trust, and pixie dust." --J.M. Barrie, Peter Pan

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Apostasy, I absolutly love this poem! It is incredible and beautiful. Keep writing! ;)