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Does She Care?

April 14, 2014
By keerthi25 BRONZE, Perth, Other
keerthi25 BRONZE, Perth, Other
3 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest present in our life is the present moment"


She walks down the street with elegance
While others stumble and fall, she stands tall
She looks around her and give us a glance
Her glance makes us all feel extremely small

We tried to defend ourselves with all our might
But when she did it, it blew our mind
She did it with such ease, it was a sight
It made us wonder, were we all blind?

She never shook with fear like the rest
Her mind and soul can never be compared
She is, and will always be the best
There was only one question, did she care?

Did she actually care about us?
Only I knew that she had never cared


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This is my first sonnet

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on Apr. 18 2014 at 2:23 am
keerthi25 BRONZE, Perth, Other
3 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest present in our life is the present moment"

Thank you....:-)  

on Apr. 16 2014 at 2:28 pm
MissLizzieGirl GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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It is a very  nice first sonnet. Hey if you have time please read and comment on my stuff TeenInk.com/users/MissLizzieGirl