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She was Finished

February 26, 2014
By AvianNudge SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
AvianNudge SILVER, Chicago, Illinois
7 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
― Ned Vizzini, It's Kind of a


All I hear are the shouts of agony
I’m running, running away from all the years of searing pain
But, I stop and halt. Its like all the gravity
has left, and all I now hear is blood pumping through my veins

Images passing through my mind so fast
Tears flowing from my mother’s face, she has no say
All the memories haunting me from my past
And now death is knocking at the door waiting for its pay.

No one stopped to realize
That her wrist were scarred
She would fantasize
of being released from these mental bars.

Too bad the knife didn’t cut deep enough in the skin,
Because then it could have been the last breath she let in.



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on Nov. 6 2014 at 1:10 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
17 articles 1 photo 168 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.
Khalil Gibran

So sad...  

on Sep. 17 2014 at 10:59 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

Wow. I'm glad this has 8 comments. You deserve it. It's absolutely beautiful and amazing and at the same time, sad. You really do have such a talent. Your words are powerful. Thank you for sharing this.

midnightwoah said...
on Aug. 5 2014 at 11:05 am
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
0 articles 0 photos 188 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve." -Stephen Chbosky

Very good dark imagingings here! This remined me of my short story, "Beyond the Back Window", if you read you would understand. Thank you for taking the audience into this chilling sonnet! 

on May. 29 2014 at 12:20 am
PoetLaureate274 PLATINUM, Manitowoc, Wisconsin
20 articles 1 photo 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have not even begun to scratch the surface of how important your life means to not only me, [y]our friends and [y]our family, but your life, which is a gift for the world that is waiting for you." - Brent Smith.

Fantastic piece of work. The breaks are right where they need to be and not a line is wasted in this poem. 5*.

on Apr. 30 2014 at 9:08 pm
GhostMatrix SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
6 articles 3 photos 82 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live Each Day To The Fullest. -Quote From Somewhere Else-

I'm Whatever You Want Me To Be - My Quote -

This is well written.   Its Emotional.     It Moves me.               Good Work.               Keep Writing.

on Apr. 30 2014 at 3:57 pm
BilliJoBaumann SILVER, Anaconda, Montana
6 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life may have limits, but you can always exceed them."-Billi Jo Baumann

That is the best poem i have read in a very long time!

Harri SILVER said...
on Mar. 10 2014 at 4:25 pm
Harri SILVER, Auburn Hills, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments
That was really well written! Keep up the good work, mate!  

on Mar. 9 2014 at 8:50 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
323 articles 5 photos 166 comments

Favorite Quote:
LOOK AT MY PROFILE. DO IT.

i can relate in so many ways and i can feel for you.....i gues that there`s not much left to say because you can`t critique a poem like this, but it`s an amazing poem =)

on Mar. 6 2014 at 9:40 pm
PhoenixTears GOLD, Stansbury Park, Utah
11 articles 6 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks. And then you die." ~Jacob (Twilight)

I.... Wow, I just am amazed I suppose. I often feel like I am the only one suffering these torments of life, but I learned a little while back that I'm not. I really love how your poem gets the meaning across so effortlessly, it's like ....... wonderful. I wish I had your talent! Keep up the great work!

on Mar. 5 2014 at 3:10 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

.....left me speechless...! Girl, you have talent!