Vista of Moonlit Night

January 3, 2013
By Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein


After every interval of a fortnight,
The queen of night comes to address,
To preach love and cascade light,
The mysterious charisma; the white dress!

As the moonlight embraces everything,
The stars blush and put on veils.
Silently, the lake keeps on smiling,
With breeze, the perfume of night sails.

The nightingale, in praise of moon,
Begins chanting a soothing song,
The charming vista is a boon,
Surely, to nirvana, it belongs.

As the bright moonlit night leaves, the craving hearts say,
"Forever-long, wish the aura would stay this way."


The author's comments:
I feel like I have fallen in love with moonlit night. The inspiration is obvious from the poem's title. I've composed it to inspire other hearts which are unaware of night's beauty - the bewitching beauty of the moonlit night!

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Zoya_Khan GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 5:58 am
Zoya_Khan GOLD, Gujranwala, Other
19 articles 0 photos 420 comments

Favorite Quote:
Where LOGIC ends, FAITH begins.
- Zoya Khan

Sure :) :) :)

on Jan. 7 2013 at 3:09 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks 2000

on Jan. 7 2013 at 3:05 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks! I'd be glad if you could check my other poems  

Paigers97 GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2013 at 2:10 am
Paigers97 GOLD, Stanardsville, Virginia
17 articles 2 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is more important than knowledge." --Albert Einstein

I love how descriptive it is. I find that a night with a full moon is quite pretty.

on Jan. 7 2013 at 2:02 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks colors

on Jan. 7 2013 at 2:01 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks teedy

on Jan. 7 2013 at 1:59 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks! word

on Jan. 7 2013 at 1:54 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks Madiha

on Jan. 7 2013 at 1:52 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks for the feedback

on Jan. 7 2013 at 1:42 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks fo the comment

on Jan. 7 2013 at 1:35 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks!!! nice to get comment from you

MysticLady said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 11:16 pm
MysticLady, Estancia, New Mexico
0 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Your limit is what you make it

This is very pretty and you write really well. Thanks for letting me read.  

Honour SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 2:34 pm
Honour SILVER, New London, Connecticut
9 articles 0 photos 181 comments

Favorite Quote:
Greater love has no man than this, that a man lay down his life for his friends. ~John 15:13

"Give me liberty or give me death!" ~Patrick Henry

Be brave and steadfast; have no fear or dread of them, for it is the Lord, your God, who marches with you; he will never fail you or forsake you. ~ Deuteronomy 31:6

"I prefer dangerous freedom over peaceful slavery" ~ Thomas Jefferson

Great poem, good job.

on Jan. 6 2013 at 2:27 pm
AnushLoveee17 GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
16 articles 2 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
sometimes you have to forget whats gone appreciate what still remains and look forward to whats coming next

This is a great poem great poem good job

on Jan. 6 2013 at 2:14 pm
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

Thanks to all friends for the comments and for their views!!!

on Jan. 6 2013 at 2:12 pm
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

Thanks! After the board exams, let's compose a poem together, in poetry chatbox. What do you say?

on Jan. 6 2013 at 11:54 am
Hamzawaseem GOLD, Lahore, Other
15 articles 1 photo 144 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The important thing is not to stop questioning." ~Einstein

thanks, here's my song lyrics. It's not very good, but do check it out TeenInk.com/poetry/song_lyrics/article/516211/Thoughts-on-Childhood/

SerenX SILVER said...
on Jan. 6 2013 at 6:45 am
SerenX SILVER, Keenesburg, Colorado
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Those who choose safety over freedom deserve neither."

I really like the imagery here. However I feel like the last line could use some work. It doesn't flow as nicely as the rest of the poem. Over all a very nice job!

MoniS said...
on Jan. 4 2013 at 10:52 pm
fantastic i luv this poem................................................

on Jan. 4 2013 at 6:34 pm
WaffleOcean2934 PLATINUM, Rogers, Minnesota
42 articles 9 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams-Eleanor Roosevelt

I love the word choices!  Great imagery.  Good job on it!  :)


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